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Cyris_Zephyr


A picture is worth a thousand words. So use two-thousand to write about it.

Comments ( 24 )

You forgot to put the death tag. Because, they will probably be Character Deaths from the Assassination. And maybe put in Twilight/Mane Six, and Cadence. Since they will be involved and are the "Targets" for the Assassination. Also, I know that Throne has his Number Two Rule of No Seduction, but what is with the Sex Tag?!

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Thank you for the suggestions. And honestly the sex tag was there for nudity, mention of sex & sexual acts, and lewd jokes. But hey if I don't need it, I'll change it.

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Just asking. And Throne having a Relationship could be nice? Despite him being a Assassin, and a Cynical Emo and all.

I ain't much of a critique when it comes to thriller stories such as this, since I'm learning how they work and execute accordingly. Pretty good story though. I wonder where this'll lead us next.

i'll follow this story, actually really like it so far.

Why did you remove the dark tag?

I am very much enjoying this story and I would love to see more :pinkiehappy:

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Kept getting an error every time I tried to update it due to "too many blue tags" yet that wasn't a blue tag. I'll see if I can fix it, however. For now I just put something in the description.

Edit: ah the problem was "too many tags". But yeah. Just left it in the description for now.

MOOOOOOOORE GIMMMMMME MOOOOOORE REEEEEEE!

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Thanks for the support from you and everyone else. :twilightsmile: Hope chapter 14 suffices for now as 15 is quite lengthy. Should be coming around later this week though.

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Omg Yessss Morrrree Content! :D

I am loving this story, keep up the amazing writing~!:pinkiehappy:

still have no idea how this story has 14 dislikes, i really enjoy it. <3

Comment posted by Aether Spark deleted Apr 19th, 2021

How is this story "a personal love letter to My Little Pony"?

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Sorry it took so long for me to get to this comment for one! And for two: It's a subjective and long answer. The shorter version of it: After finding MLP during late 2020 and it giving me a small comfort in a rough time, I found FIMFiction shortly after. I spent the rest of the nights in 2020 reading and decided I wanted to give back. Hope that somewhat answers the question.

As edgy as he is, this isn't quite as bad as I expected, enjoying the read at least

He's gonna show up and they immediately know he's the assassin, knowing the princesses, they'll just lead him on and mess with him way too much XD

a very civil and interesting interview, page coulda touched on a few more topics, but whatever

awww, silver is missing out on those ear rubs

didn't really expect him to come clean, but I expect his giving up at the end there on earth probably was a change of heart before he even saw equestria

this "master" is incredibly stupid if he thought that'd work

they're kinda cute together looks at romance tag

fantastic piece, main character came across as edgy at first.. okay he's still kinda edgy, but he's coming around as a developed character, very nice.

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