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Spooky Pineapple
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Spooky Pineapple
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What the hell, why the downvotes? Sure, there are some spelling errors, but other than that it’s pretty good.
The idea is great, the execution as well and the character’s interactions fit, what more do you want?
The two “bad” things I have to say are: 1) the “last round” was way to short. You could have written at least one more paragraph. 2) I don’t think this is a romance story.
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I used the Romance tag because Rarity and Spring get really into each other, but I think I could lose it, you're probably right.
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I think it’s likely others don’t like the premise, it’s just a niche idea that a select few will enjoy. I’m on the fence personally, but it’s not my cup of tea all in all.
Medical science sure feels like magic sometimes.
I'm just wondering when will Rainbow lose her arms and replace her legs with those blade legs to run even faster now.
Now I just want to see Rarity as a headless, limbless, cock sock for Spike. Nice work.
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a premise and setting that actually makes sense and isn't based on shameless fetish fuel?