• Member Since 8th Nov, 2018
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Equestrian patriot and devoted follower of the God-Empresses of Ponykind. The fanfics I write, follow or favourite may show that. I also make SFM artworks on Derpibooru with the name FanaticHeretic7.


Dusk Spectre's veteran experience as a Lunar Legionnaire can only go so far to prepare him for when a routine patrol through the Everfree Forest goes badly wrong, and an ensuing fight for survival becomes the situation for him and his squad.

Now surrounded by unholy magical monsters craving for the taste of Ponies, will their skill and resolve be enough for them to escape to safety? Or will the God-Empress' protection abandon them, their enemies too strong and numerous, condemning them to die standing as soldiers?

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 8 )

Hmm, I'm looking forward to more of this.

I appreciate that. I hope to not disappoint.

Pretty curious on what happens next.

Didn't expect this took place after the movie there(or even season 9?).
Wonder what happened that led NMM to come back again and take over?

Honestly, I have left some of the world-building vague, with the occasional mentions of parts of it by some of the characters to give a rough idea what has happened or what is happening in the world. I did this to not only let the reader imagine what could have happened or is happening, but also because too much of a world-building dump can make the fic come off more as an encyclopedia and not an actual story. If that makes sense.

But I am flattered you have been reading this fanfic. Thank you^^

I loved the bit on how Dusk admired the beauty of Nightmare Moon/Luna's night there.
Just shows how what she really wanted is others to see how beautiful her night is.

Apparently I didn't get the notification of your reply for some reason.
Really odd.

Dusk sure finally made it.
And the details on how injured/worn out he was as he struggled all the way back to the castle was interesting to see.

Seeing how Nightmare Moon reacts and such in this chapter was really great to read.

Curious on what happened to characters such as Spike in this AU there?

Hello Fanatic-Heretic-101,
I have reviewed your story, which you can see here.
I trusted you have fun with writing this. Sadly, the feeling is not mutual.
Sincerely yours,
Scoping Landscape

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