A/N Don't try a few of the things I'm about to write because it takes years of training, and after breaking a few bones learning how to do it right, so like I said just because some other people can do it. Don't do it! That is all if you get hurt trying any of these things I warned you.
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I sped off not caring about the tires. It was around five when I took a nap, I looked at the time on my car it was only thirty minutes of time that passed.
'How long was that walk?' I thought as I drove faster and faster. I turned left, and saw the same ambulance from my dream.
"Oh god no!" I shouted, as I turned right and watched it follow me. I sped up and lost it for a second or two. I looked and saw I was going eighty in a fifty. I quickly slowed down, surprised I saw no cops in the area. I did a quick turn into the parkinglot only to see the ambulance waiting there.
"What the hell" I asked myself, I quickly did the same thing as my dream. I drove the car and waited to turn, I pulled out seeing the stop light change. I saw the same car heading in the wrong direction, I quickly slammed on my cars breaks. I looked and saw it was not stopping.
I looked down and then looked in the mirror, I sighed as I jumped out of the car and into traffic.
"What the hell the breaks aren't working." I said as I turned and saw the traffic. I quickly jumped onto my feet and ran to the parking lot. Well not really so easily, in fact I almost got ran over. Here is how it happened.
"Hey kid what the hell are you doing? You just jumped out of your car!" A man shouted at me angrily.
"My bad." I said giving off a nervous smirk. I looked and saw the car smash into mine. I quickly stood up and started to run, my car was rolling right towards me.
"Ah what the hell!" I shouted as I stopped. I looked in horror as the car was coming right for me. It was still low to the ground and was not stopping. I gulped as I thought at what I was about to do.
"This is crazy." I said. I quickly ran towards my car, knowing I could not out run it. I watched as it bounced in the air, I took advantage and slid under the car. I looked up and saw I dodged the car.
"Ok that is why you work out." I sighed in relief seeing as my speed saved me, only by a few inches. I didn't notice that the car door broke off and crushed my arm, until I looked down and screamed in pain. I heard the sirens of the ambulance and a cop car go off. I looked and saw a cop rush to my side and rip the door off my arm.
"Are you alright?" He asked. I looked at my arm, and saw the bones in my arm were crushed all over. I noticed a strange glow in the officers eyes, as with the paramedics.
"Nev-never...better." I coughed out as I stood up.
"Please lay down sir." The paramedics said to me.
"I told you never been better." I said leaving the wreck. I quickly looked back and the cop and paramedics talking. They looked at me and chased me.
"Sir please come back!" They shouted, seeing that I was losing them. I stopped as my arm bumped into a wall. I screamed in pain, but I kept going.
I started running faster and faster, my adrenaline kept fueling me. I looked and saw the currency exchange.
"Dammit stop or I'll shoot!" The cop shouted. I looked back and saw him pull out his pistol, I quickly moved faster until I was in the streets again. The cars were in few here, mostly because it was a pony crossing area. I ran to the pony crossing area before I heard a gun shot.
"What the hell man?" I asked looking back.
"I told you to stop." The cop said aiming his taser.
"Wait a second I need to see Twilight just let me go." I said trying to reason with him.
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Who is Twilight?" The cop asked. I looked in the V.I.P line and saw her, getting her currency changed back to bits.
"That pony right there she is leaving, because of me I need to tell her something before she leaves." I sighed out.
"What are you doing shoot him!" The paramedics ordered.
"I can't do that he has done nothing, in fact nothing even happened here." The cop said leaving. The strange glow in his eyes disappeared.
"Hey!" I shouted.
"What is it kid?" They asked.
"Thanks!" I said pushing through the ponies to get to Twilight. I hopped the fence, not feeling like taking an extra minute to walk around. I didn't care and felt no pain in my arm now. I jumped down an landed on the arm.
"AHH!" I shouted in pain.
'No you can care about your pain later.' I thought as I stood up and ran again. s
"Twilight!" I shouted as I saw her about to go through the portal.
"Huh?" Twilight asked spinning around.
"Twi-Twilight...ple-please don't go." I panted out trying to catch my breath.
"Your arm!" Twilight shouted worriedly looking at it.
"It's fine just a car door crushed it." I said looking at it. The pain hit me again, I collapsed to the ground and screamed.
"Why did that even happen?" Twilight ask running over.
"I came to stop you." I said with a smirk on my face.
"Stop me from what?" Twilight asked, her horn lit up again as she placed it on my arm. I winced in pain feeling the horn touch my completely smashed arm.
"Leaving, look Twilight I'm so sorry please stay with me." I begged her while saying sorry. I looked and saw her do a questioning face.
"Please Twilight I'll miss you if you leave." I pleaded. She gave a hmm sound through her mouth.
"Come on please Twilight." I sighed out.
"Sure I'll be your roomy again." Twilight said with a giggle.
"You will?" I asked in joy.
"Yes." Twilight told me.
"Oh this is so amazing." I said as I stood up.
"I'm a very forgiving pony." Twilight told me. I looked at my arm and saw not a single scratch on it.
"Let's go home roomy." Twilight said.
A/N Sorry it took so long for me to update this. So go ahead and hate me for that. Oh yea and don't go jumping out of cars like a stunt man or something.
That was.....overly intense. Almost to the McGruber level....Oh well.
Nice chapter tho. And congrats on your new-found ability to form coherent sentences with punctuation!
I look forward to more.
well i definately called it with the de ja vu chapter felt a little short though
Nice work yet again hope to see more brilliant chapters!
well shit
1283239 yea sorry about the shortness of this chapter
...A police officer can't draw his firearm unless there is a reasonable threat directed at him/her or to the general public, and he/she can't fire unless there is comparable threat (if the bad guy is running, and has done any violent crime, then an officer cannot even think about shooting him). That officer would have just lost his badge and would be serving time for what he threatened to do, worse if he actually did it.
I can't go on. This needs some serous work. The characters act way too unrealistically (ex: not being pissed when the MC got transformed into a dog without his permission), and the grammar needs a complete overhaul. I might check back in a few months to see if the errors got corrected, as the plot is fairly interesting, but if they haven't been fixed, I'm not going to waste my time reading this when I got other stories to read.
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I have to agree with ghost on this. There's an interesting idea and setup but I have problems with the reactions. I would be looking to arrest a Twilight for turning me into a dog against my will. The officer's reaction was also ridiculous as pointed out by Ghost
I don´t like it, that he has to apologize because he was right.
The Katie Character leaves him, because he don´t let her do with him what she wanted?