The USS Alabaster, the US's first inter-system colony ship, uses a prototype Matter/Antimatter annihilation reactor to power the 4.6 million-ton craft to LV-426, where the four thousand colonists and hundreds of construction workers, miners and engineers, will make a new home for themselves. The sponsor: Weyland Yutani, took only volunteers for the mission, volunteers that did so only because of their patriotism, with over two-thirds of the ship was taken up by cargo and the command module was simply a tug that was welded on with the compatibility to use the new engine. During the flight a conveniently stray asteroid hit the ship, either being exposed to the ravages of the vacuum or killed outright, all but ten survived the impact, this is their story
first things first,
please format your story, put spaces between paragraphs and dialogue
and it feels as if there is a lot of lost potential on reactions and observances from both parties, lack of detail.
maybe a Celestia POV?
otherwise i like the idea, and if you make some changes will read future chapters.
I was about to post a new chapter but I forgot to save it and my pc crashed. Did all that work for nothing
wut
probably should have gone in a blog post :o
Issue a blog post and put the story on hiatus.
2050548 doing that right now, blog post already done, now to hiatus the story
2050552
I've made a thread for Minecraft stories in the group of the same name. In it, I set out a list to brainstorm for ideas. You're welcome to steal one. That's what it's for.
2050556 link please?
2050575
Group
wha what is this no story NO STORY WHAT WERE YOU SMOKING jk jk
2050907 rework in progress, come back in a day or so and it'll have something up
2052062 i know that i hope this rework is good good luck
2053203 story's back
Due to it no longer being a Minecraft story, I am booting it from the archive. Sorry.
3003280 it's alright