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Great start keep going.
Not the way I was expecting her to gain her powers in this, but I like it
Solid first chapter, though wasn't expecting you to go with "they end up aware of the hypnosis" route, but it really works
Nice story, and is the pooping in their diapers regular or like diarrhea? because it said farts and sometimes with farts the mess is more wet and liquidy hehe
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More solid.
This chapter was great as well
Okay, wasn't expecting Rarity to already be into this.
Maybe add some complications. Like she has to use the amulet to peer at their weaknesses and find a way to undermine and convince them.
How's the next chapter?
I am intrigued
moisty diaper
that escalated quickly
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