paternity roulette

Dinokid11

Dinokid11 #1 · Feb 17th, 2021 · 2 · · Chapter 1: The set up. ·

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Great work keep it up

Navarone

Navarone #2 · Feb 17th, 2021 · 2 · · Chapter 1: The set up. ·

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Bruh I've been hoping for something like this for so long.
At long last it seems my prayers have been answered!

Mist_Chaser

Mist_Chaser #3 · Feb 18th, 2021 · 3 · · Chapter 1: The set up. ·

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"I agree as well Darling, she even told me about an awful break up she had with some ruffian named 'Brad' back on earth." Rarity joined in, remembering a private girl talk you both had on Hearts and Hooves day.

My guess is that Brad was a Chad...

Mirror Star

Mirror Star #4 · Feb 18th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 1: The set up. ·

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I'll see where this goes.

jjrock7H

jjrock7H #5 · Feb 18th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Costume ·

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I like the way this is done, I like a little bit of second person and the concept is fun, I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.
If anyone read this before I managed to edit it, I blame a little bit of a brain fart.

Comment posted by 3-tap deleted Feb 21st, 2021

MrAnonn

MrAnonn #7 · Feb 25th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Costume ·

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so far amazing story!

Lord Panther

Lord Panther #8 · Feb 26th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Costume ·

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Are you going to finish this story

DragonKiller345

DragonKiller345 #9 · Mar 7th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 2: The Costume ·

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I hope he’s planning on finishing the story it’s very interesting

fluttershyfan3030

fluttershyfan3030 #10 · Mar 7th, 2021 · 4 · · Chapter 1: The set up. ·

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From what i've read you might want to add a "Dark" tag to this story. Since your characters effectively said "Because Anon avoids us on Nightmare Night we are going to rape a baby into her". Let's see how dark and evil you'll go.

fluttershyfan3030

fluttershyfan3030 #11 · Mar 7th, 2021 · 7 · · Chapter 3: The party ·

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Now that i read what all you have in this story. I firmly believe the "Dark" tag is necessary. After that exchange with Rarity if i was femanon i would've nope'd out of SCC and apologized to Pinkie for leaving the party because Rarity creeped me out. Heck after finding out there would be more ponies than Pinkie and the CMC at this party and if i were her with her anxiety i'd say "Sorry Pinkie i'm not going to your party as I don't know or trust your friends minus Fluttershy as much as you do. Also I don't want to be around Twilight because she asks inappropriate and uncomfortable question about me or my Sexuality." and if this takes place after Twilight was aware of the EQG universe i'd add "besides if Twilight is so keen to learn about human sexuality or the female human body she should go talk with Sunset Shimmer and learn what she wants from her pony turned human friend." Then i'd add "If you are truly my friend Pinkie you will accept my No and not try to convince or force me to go to this party." Then i close the door and go on with the rest of the evening in peace and Quiet. Let's see what you do.

MegaMasterKing

MegaMasterKing #12 · Mar 7th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 3: The party ·

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10711773
completely agree

Navarone

Navarone #13 · Mar 8th, 2021 · 1 · · Chapter 3: The party ·

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10711773
Very true

Navarone

Navarone #14 · Mar 8th, 2021 · 3 · · Chapter 3: The party ·

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Betrayal and trickery, no matter how small is one of the fastest ways to lose someone's trust.
They might think it's for her own best but I think the person herself knows better what she needs.

fluttershyfan3030