Name's Ice, don't do much, don't talk much....but I do make a mean mac n' cheese.
As sweet apple acres starts to go down hill Big Macintosh is forced to find another job to bring in some cash, being the big stallion he is he figures Boxing might suit him, follow Mac as he learns that nothing is never as easy as it seems.
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It is a cool story and well written, but somethings seems messy about it.
Rarity approves this Story.
1186802 Rarity approved of something messy
I could nitpick at every little detail, pointing out grammatical errors and punctuation, but I'm just too lazy at the moment. Overall, it seems a bit rushed with the character of Big Mac, the gentle giant immediately going to boxing without asking for any other options.
Also, Applejack talks a lil' some'ing like this, sugarcube.
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You got me and I cant speak like rarity for the life of me.
I've got a bit of a problem with the title.
Replacing "ippo" with "Macintosh" results in a word salad with no meaning.
1187056 I understand what you're saying, however I couldn't think of a better title.
1186869 Okay, if we look at my history of writing then we can tell I have a habit of making errors and the ignorance to not ask for help most of the time. Two, if we again look at my past then we see that I never explain things in one chapter.
1187286 Yeah, while I know their accents living in Scotland kind do of makes it hard to swap to anything else.
I am not really seeing the connection to Hajime no Ippo. Like... at all.
It could be any boxing story you try to... what exactly are you doing with Hajime no Ippo again? It's not going to be a crossover, you are lacking the tag for that. The feeling and motivation is way different from what Ippo provides and, while it is arguable that Big Mac is out of character with resorting to boxing that quickly, this seems oddly forced.
This left me pretty disappointed. I was drawn in by the manga reference and... yeah. Nothing behind that
EDIT:
Also, this name sort of implies some sort of Apple commercial (har har)
1189170 Chapter 2, explanations.
Now this seems like a fun idea.
Please do keep up the good work.
Not to be rude,but when is you next chapter for The Portal To Equestria Coming out?
1569423...Wrong guy.
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Oops!Sorry.I really have no idea why I said that.Maybe I pressed the wrong thing.
1574513 Or you read the story I preread for and clicked my name by mistake.
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Yeah,let's go with that!
XD
But in a way,you could try writing a 'Portal to Equestria' Story,I'm even writing one myself on an other site.
1574535 Pass, I've wrote a HIE before.
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HIE?
1574560 Human in Equestria.
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Lol, k.
But do you want to read my story? (5 chps long,but not to long tho.)
psst
noticing a suspicious lack of updates here
no pressure though
followin'
2040356 This was an idea that came to me when I was tired and lacking brain power, for lack of a better reason other than I hate taking things down without reason it'll stay up but it will not be updated.