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Slendy


"Create something that you love."

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Prequel to Indomitable


A lone Hunter and her companion stood in the smoldering walls of a fortress, a wasteland of death and destruction overtaking the once lush and vibrant land now bathed in crimson skies. A monster revived to revel in devoured flesh and crushed bone, to make blood run dry. For its fire to burn through metal and blacken the lands, boiling their rivers. Fate has awakened.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

Glad I'm not the only MHW fan in the horse fandom. :pinkiehappy: Have a couple Fatalis references in my ongoing story. Will have to take a closer look at this.

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I am honored to meet a fellow Hunter! ^_^

I'll be eagerly following this, I love Monster Hunter!
This is a great start, I also want to hoof bump.
*pat pat*

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I humbly accept your hoof-bump fellow Hunter!

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The King of Love Bugs. Second most recent chapter has a reference.

Exciting and dramatic!

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It only gets more dramatic from here! (I mean that in the best way possible) ^_^

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I forgot to favourite the story! Thanks for reminding me. :heart:

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No worries my friend:)

Epic! Thanks for the brutal ride that was that battle. I loved the details of character, gave everything so much life while still maintaining the air of death that the monster conveyed.

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Great to know you enjoyed it :twilightsmile: I really wanted to sorta capture how Fatalis was built up in legend to be this unbeatable visage of destruction, the true God among monsters, even though it lost an eye it's power went unphased from start to finish. FYI, I maaaay have another two-shot planned for the holidays, something a little less grim and closer to Indomitable's timeline.

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I am also a Hunter of the Research Commission, and... I have not succeeded in facing this thing. We cannot call it a monster, it is Death. I didn't even save the game before quitting. Nobody should face that thing alone, even once. That is torture. And your retelling is... harrowing. I spent the whole time trying to survive, and do enough damage to call for help, and I didn't make it. Couldn't. Ran down the clock and I couldn't scratch it, spent most of that time trying to dodge attacks. How can anyone fight Fatalis without Fatalis equipment?!

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Fatalis is, in the Monster Hunter universe, the equivalent of a deity. It single-handedly wiped out Castle Schrade in a single night, and supposedly wiped out the civilisations we see as ruins. In Iceborne, they fully sell what a Black Dragon is; Death. Alatreon is the prelude to how close to perfect you need to be, not just as a team but to carry your own weight against Fatalis.

My retelling takes what I've learned of Fatalis' history and what little lore there is; to this kingdom, like Schrade, this wasn't a battle they could win, and I'm happy to have sold that feeling well as everyone poured their souls into attempting to defeat the Black Dragon.

But, it took my own team and I dozens of attempts with Alatreon gear to boot before toppling Fatalis, but I can confidently say you'll prevail someday, stay strong, Hunter.

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