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It's "quiet"
So…are we gonna a complete ignore the voice that ask him what was he when he wake up? Because yeah, he wake up someone kind of greet him and then poof nobody was there or at least that is what is imply.
UGGGHHHHHHH!!!
that power acquisition was soooooooooooooo cringey and too OP!
congrats ur now a lesser version of superman w/o the xray/heat vision, flight and weakness to kryptonite.....
i like HIE's. no i love HIE's but i dunno i guess reading them too much or i guess the novelty of it just wasnt there anymore and well i guess thats why im a bit more critical on it.
sorry bout that!
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The last one on the list of his new attributes is actually positive.
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While the transition was... very damn janky I'd reckon He got knocked out for a brief period and that it was Luna noticing something strange in the dream sphere or whatever, which would explain a lack of reaction to it. That or scrying.
I realize I'm commenting on a year old story with nearly 50 chapters, so it's a little late for this, but:
* It's really weird that a random voice talks to him and yet no speaker for the voice ever appears and he never acknowledges it. Imagine you heard a voice right now. Would you completely ignore it? Would you think it odd if you looked ane nobody was there? In this case, he doesn't even bother to look.
* The random super powers are doubly awkward. First because he never wished for them. He wished to go where the amulet was from. The amulet granted that. Why is it giving him random magical superpowers too for no reason? Second, the random activation absolutely reeks of laziness. It's a get out of jail free card that you, as the author, can use whenever you want, rather than when it makes sense.
Both these combined add up to "random stuff will happen for no reason and whether or not it makes any sense." That doesn't make for a good story.
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No, nobody with a single brain cell would ever ignore a voice in their head, contrary to us normal humans this Mc seems to be retarded.
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He assumed the speaker was hidden because he was alone he never realized that it was talking in his head.