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I like the story so far I shall be watching with great interest
She know her friends well. Two, no three of them might do it out of reflex.
This Luna is so fluent in modern language that it threw me off track for a moment.
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Rainbow definitely would. She leap first and look second. She lucky never gotten into serious trouble because of it thanks to her friends.
Again, I know I'm late to the party and it's probably already been decided, but I kinda hope he doesn't learn to use magic like a unicorn. Someone having magic, but only magic they can use to buff themself is a unique and intriguing idea.
Rainbow sure. Maybe even Pinkie, but only because she's impulsive and often just 'joins in'. Rarity and especially Twilight, though, are not at all like that. AJ it depends if she thinks her family is threatened, so she could go both ways (giggity).
How? I'm pretty sure you can't tell a reature's race by their voice. For all she knows, it's another creature that just lived among the zebra. I would have said, "Luna recognized one as female with a zebrican (or whatever you're using) accent."
So far, so good. Not much to really say about this one other than I can already see an improvement in your writing. That's kinda impressive.
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A bit late yes, and yeah it's been decided. While in theory he could, on the whole, and at the moment, he cannot. The way he uses magic is different from unicorns.
Like before, on the whole, I agree with you, but at the time of writing, too many fics had them doing that . At the very least, if the six started a poor plan, they all committed to it, making them better at teamwork than 99.99999 repeating percentage of LoL players.
It's Zecora's speaking style, how it's pure rhymes.
Thank you .