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I'm enjoying your story so far. It has been interesting also even though it's still a few weeks away but merry Christmas
Midnight Moon?
Is that somehow different to Nightmare Moon?
Great chapter!
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Glad you're enjoying it. A few weeks will pass by quickly so merry early Christmas.
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Midnight Moon is the daughter of Nightmare Moon and Midnight Sparkle.
I was just a bit tired and about 8ish shots in, I missed it, but it's fixed now.
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Thank you, I've started working on chapter 11, and I know what'll happen in 12.
Excited for chapters 11 and 12 that your working on and I hope you enjoy writing out your story, every bit and piece of it
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No it's not..but good chapter
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I know, I was joking about a mistype I made while drinking. I couldn't resist.
Either way glad you liked the chapter.
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I'm honestly trying not to rush getting to chapter 12, I already have it planned out and really want to rush ahead to it. Ah well, just means I'll probably be putting out more chapters then normal this week.
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Would you believe me if I said that I started to follow this story just for the inflation fetish? Now I stay for the story and content.
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I can believe it. I've heard odder trust me. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
There is no need to rush in writing your chapters unless you have to other wise just relax and take your time and have fun
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I don't plan to rush them. I am however eager to get down chapter 12, it'll be adding 'things' to the story. What those 'things' will be, I'll leave open for now. To get down 12 I gotta finish 11, and I'm already working on that; it'll probably be a longer chapter.
Alright then I'm all fired up to read chapter 11 and 12 now
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Well I'm almost 2,500 words into ch 11, so it should be done in a day or two, I hope. Honestly wrote more about his clothes then I thought I would, but I wanted to paint a good picture of them.
It is never a bad idea to paint a picture using your words in story telling it can only make it better and more exciting. People just need use it in the right place in the story. But that is just my opinion
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Agreed, I kind of had to use it for describing the clothes. I suppose I could have linked pictures to how they looked in the notes but I went with typing it out. Honestly I can see how he'd look in the clothes when I close my eyes and think about it.
I completely agree
didn't you say you fixed this
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I thought I did, guess I forgot to hit save chapter, my bad.
i don't know if anyone else has notified you, but there are multiple instances of a misspelled word thru several chapters. the word "fount" when it should be "found". just thought i'd point it out.
She. ;)
This is my third time trying to get into the story, and for some reason I am now thoroughly enjoying it. Only thing I’ll say is I hope the grammar and pacing improves slightly in later chapters, but other than that, this is great and interesting!