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Their mouths. Teats. They both were sucking her teats and both pulled away, so singular form of first half of the sentence doesn't make sense.
Thick. Imagine how hard it's to read clop when you can't stop yourself from being distracted by typos. XD
The only source of think pheromones in that room is a certain book horse.
I dare assume that only Applejack is still a virgin.
A cycle of the moon is the phases going around, if I wasn't clear, and if I remember correctly, it's where the word 'month' comes from
Got to say, you did a good work keeping this characterization up. Most people give up on Zecora or simply make her talk normally. Well, I do think her talking normally is usually better since some writers put non-sensical or just stupid stuff just to rhyme. But in your case, you did it pretty well. Congrats
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Thank you . When ever Zecora speaks, she shall rhyme. Well, chapter 72 I got a bit creative with it (don't worry, it still fits the spirit of Zecora), but still. Coming up with all the rhymes is rewardingly challenging.
Giving this a reread, I've been seeing several errors on occasion but have been lazy, but this I gotta ask... does the guy have four arms? :P
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MORTAL WOMBAT!!! (I swear, only like 3 people will get that reference).
Nope. It could have just been the way it's written that can make it appear that way.