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Interesting chapter here. Opens up some possibilities down the road, and loved seeing Twilight embarrassed at the end.
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A lot better than a chapter about exposition to be honest.
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There's some contention on how long 1 moon is in Equestria. One the one hand, it makes logical sense for 1 moon to be one lunar cycle, making 1000 moons roughly 84 years 4 months, or something around there. But Twilight also says Luna has been in the moon for over 1000 years in a later season episode. So, I'ma leave what a moon is as an open thing, a unit of time that was used, but not used anymore and isn't really compatible with the current calendar/way to tell time.
Nice
The faith bit reminded me of when I was trying to figure out wat the different stats did in ff14 mmo. "Piety" gives mana recovery, I think. If I've not forgotten.
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Maybe you could say that one of them decided to mess with how long the phases stay up, like you might with your desktop wallpapers.
Like maybe they used to take a year, and when sun horse learned about that prophecy, she tried to break her out early by speeding it up as much as she could, and broke the mechanism.
You have "that" here twice.
"Apart" needs to be two words. "A part"
There's no evidence of a god in this world either.
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There isn't, but he was kinda just ranting off there, so it felt natural. Besides, the greater spirits somewhat took that place. Like remember the episode Dungeons and Discord and how Discord described himself? He was describing himself exactly as a deity would. Also, this world is low key based off of EaW; so with what's happening on Griffonia, well, there is (it's pretty strong too), it's just not introduced yet.
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Ok, I understand. Three things:
1. What's EaW?
2. You used the wrong word when starting your first sentence. You want "There", not "They're".
3. The story is great so far.
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EaW (Equestria at War) is a mod for HoI4 (Hearts of Iron 4). It's genuinely one of, if not the best, mods for the game. It has a bunch of submods (looking at you Escalation '84) and in-built crossover with OWB (Old World Blues) the Fallout mod. Hell with one of the countries you can literally become the Illuminati. In another you can bring Grover II back to life.
And that's for the compliment
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I've seen some things on here that mention Equestria at War before, but other than that, I'm clueless. I also know very little about Fallout. Haven't decided whether it's worth playing or not.
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If you're curious how EaW looks here, Alex does a second one off of it, though there is someone who plays through all the countries.
https://youtu.be/0La2O0qBoXo
As for Fallout, I like it. Though, the cursed quarry is, well, I had feelings about it. And the museum of witchcraft got a major wtf from me. If anyone is wondering, I saved the deathclaw egg. 2snacks did a 'Two Best Sisters Play' of Fallout 4.
https://youtu.be/mzkwAv6Cbt4
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That's cool, I wouldn't take my comments as offering anything more than general commentary; idea suggestions, or making requests. I generally prefer to let authors write the story they want to create rather than nag; complain, or try to force what I want into a story. (Unless of course it is a CYOA)
An example of an idea suggestion would be. I believe that Julius currently needs to break off pursuing Applejack for the time being, in place of focusing his attentions towards Fluttershy, and starting to form a relationship Pinkie Pie. I can pm you my reasoning if you're interested in hearing how I came to that conclusion.
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Sure, why not. I'm open to suggestions.
I take a little break from mlp and find one my favorite isekai fanfics have a few chapters on it ^^