Starshine Swirl is the name of my pony OC. Pinkie is best pony. But only by a little bit.
When Twilight Sparkle finds a broken young mare hiding in an alley, she is forced to question the innocence of the world she knows and loves. How did this pony get here? What happened to her? Will she ever recover?
(Starshine Swirl's debut fanfic, picture drawn by me)
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I can't wait to find out what happens next.
ALLONS-Y!!!
78501 Sir, that is a good thing.
78562 you... you like it?
I will be keeping an eye on this
good job
tracking time!!
Sorry the next chapter is taking so long! I haven't had time to work on it.
I'll try to post it tomorrow or the day after! 
Author's Note: I spelled "mannequine" like that on purpose, to put "equine" in there. Just in case you picked that up and thought it was a typo.
Interesting concept, unheard that unicorn's horn can be sawed off.
Starshine, I can clearly see that you've improved with this update and it makes me sincerely happy!
But pace yourself. Calm down and try not to rush things. I know it might be (and it would be) boring to describe in minimum details Rarity's shenanigans at C.B.
I am reminded now about a rule I read somewhere around the internet regarding fanfics. It's called "Rusty Bathroom Tit Stab" and what it says follows something along these lines:
"If it takes all of two minutes for your main character to find themselves in a rusted bathroom stabbing a nurse in the tits, YOU ARE DOING IT WRONG."
Don't worry, I'll be sticking with this story to the end. I liked its original concept.
This isn't too bad of read. I wont give it rating or track for now, to see how it goes so far.
I agree with Lucefudu, I felt like the story were going to fast. Pace it up and explain everything in detail if you can.
Lucefudu......i have no comment. that made me laugh.
Also i am definitly bookmarking this one.
171266
171302 I got that from Brony XVII's story of Silent Ponyville: Reunion. He said that it belongs to Yahtzee, from Zero Punctuation! I actually don't know if the quote applies just for Silent Hill games; but to me it made sense for a fanfic rule too.
171261>>171266 Thanks for your critique! I was pleasantly surprised that you noticed I updated and graced me with your opinions! I shall try to improve with the next few chapters.
Twilight: Oh...No...
Long chapter ftw. Anyway, if anyone still even reads this anymore, thanks for sticking with me!
I hope I've improved with this chapter!
Woo! Ne wChapter!
must... Type... Up... Other... Chapters...
I NEED TO WRAP THIS UP SO I CAN START POSTING MY OTHER, BETTER FIC!