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he/they/star // bumbling doof who likes apple horse

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Often, while Applejack & Rainbow Dash spend time in Sweet Apple Acres, they race. It's always delightful for them to compete & gain appreciation for their abilities. However, while they take a break to eat some fresh apples, Applejack mistakenly eats an apple that's already been on the ground for too long... so she gets sick. Luckily for them, Fluttershy knows a thing or two about caring for ill individuals.

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This was, in a word, cute.

Now, on the advice side of things, you shouldn't use the "&" symbol when the word "and" will suffice. Also bolding the dialogue isn't necessary.

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