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Makin' Cupcakes


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Silver Tongue and Half-Pence are on the outskirts of a bustling city, where nopony with the wit of a turkey would enter, but for these two, it's considered home. The poor part of this town is where the homeless seek shelter and thugs seek refuge, making it hard for anypony there to make a living for themselves. It's difficult to get out of there, though. You either get a breakthrough or you find yourself in handcuffs. This is my first story, so I would appreciate any constructive criticism. Thanks, and enjoy.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 17 )

(should I really go into detail?).
"Put that down, you don't know where that's been." I wanted to smack it out of my hand, but then I would have to spend the rest of my life washing that same hoof.

Yes, you should, and also, ponies don't have hands, we have hooves!! :trixieshiftright:

74675 I just noticed that. FFFFUUUUUUUUUUU:flutterrage:

Blueblood==Nice?

:pinkiegasp::derpytongue2::derpyderp2::derpyderp1::raritystarry::eeyup::moustache::trollestia::twistnerd::unsuresweetie::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::rainbowhuh::derpyderp2:W.T.F

They don;t really charge at soup kitchens, although, this is Equestria


Also, i am surprised by everypony's generosity, sounds like Equestria is ruled by Rarity.

This can't be good... :unsuresweetie: Can't wait for more!

thank god he snt a dick again hes one of my lest favorite characters (so is rarity lol) in this fic i like him

75189 (really) going and lieing to arest someone applejack would be ashamed :ajsleepy:

Skyrim reference ftw! :rainbowlaugh:

This keeps getting more intriguing, keep it up!

Wow~ I really enjoyed the chapter, keep it goin, 5/5 :pinkiesmile:

77127 I'm glad somepony caught on to that. :yay:

I really don't like the idea of Princess Celestia being such a cruel ruler.:trollestia:

78454 i do i have someone i like and then i have celestia

Damn celestias a bitch huh? Cant wait till she gets what's coming to her.

I still think celestias a bitch

this is an awesome story and I hope you plan to continue.

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