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Bommah


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When the pregasus Bommah took a walk through the park that morning, he did not think anything out of the ordinary would occur at all. But when he crosses paths with a fetching unicorn mare, his life takes the most unexpected left turn he could have conceived. Is there more to this chance of fate than meets the eye? Read on to find out!

This story was inspired by a little roleplaying session on omegle. The protagonist is my OC, named Bommah because I could not think of a more original name for him.

This will take me a while to write as at my current time in life I am very busy and I have a serious procrastination problem, but I aspire for this story to become a long, great, romantic tragedy.

I hope you all enjoy it as the journey unfolds.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

Well, the story was okay for an afternoon read. You could work on the description some more, otherwise your story won't get noticed.

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Alright, will do.:pinkiesmile:

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