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A Shy Brony


Soapbox writer on Equestria Daily. Trying my hand at real writing, despite my lack of experience.

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Stormwing has a great life as an elite member of the Equestrian royal guard. But a decline in monster attacks means his life has become quite boring as of late. What he doesn't expect though, is that tonight is going to turn into a battle for survival when a powerful enemy returns to Equestria.

My first attempt ever at writing fanficiton.

Hence why the title is so bad.

This is just a one shot to see if I can write fanficiton at all.

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Comments ( 6 )

For a writer who's starting out, this is really good!

Looks like an interesting villain introduction. I wonder why he only went for Chrysalis. Even if he didn't want the other two as minions they could have made for a nice distraction.

>>The Gamer Brony
Thank you!

>>asdtroi8895
The main reason why is because I'm a writer just starting out honestly. If I decide to follow up this story, it will be easier to write about two villains, instead of four.

Not a bad start. Your grammar's a little bit messy in a couple of places, though—for future reference, I'd suggest looking through your future stories a couple of times to search for grammatical errors or, alternatively, finding a proofreader of some sort to help do it for you.

Other than that, this was quite an interesting introduction. Best of luck to you!
:)

What would he need Queen Chrysalis for?

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