After defeated Xehanort and brought Sora back. He, Donald, & Goofy will continue their adventure at Equestria, where they meet new friends, new magical places, discover ancient secrets and facing new villains.
After defeated Xehanort and brought Sora back. He, Donald, & Goofy will continue their adventure at Equestria, where they meet new friends, new magical places, discover ancient secrets and facing new villains.
I'm not into Kingdom Hearts, so I can't help you with that, but your grammar is shockingly poor. For example:
After who defeated Xehanort?
Have you considered getting an editor?
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Well, Sora and his friends defeated him
10167064 A better way to word the description would be this:
Thanks wave your the best.
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I should thanking you, your ideas are awesome
This is pretty good. I like it.
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Thanks
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No problem pal.