• Member Since 21st Aug, 2012
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lunarrepublic44


I love to write, and i am about to post my first fanfic, i am brand new to this site. I am a 15 year old girl, and i think derpy is best pony!<3

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Vinyl Scratch, the mare everyone believed to be alright. Now, shes scarred, inside and out. She looks upon the past events that led her to become the frail hearted mess she is today.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

*sees Vinyl Scratch story* Well this seems fi-
*sees Derpy as picture* ...
MUST... CONTAIN... RAGE... AND READ... STORY!
*reads story* Very interesting... making Derpy/Ditzy as the lover of Vinyl Scratch...

Sucks that it has to be depressing. But, you did your job on it, so I'm okay with it.

First impression is wall of text. Will read later :applejackconfused:

Okay. It was nice.

A few grammar glitches here and there. Can't say this got hold of my heart.

If maybe it were a little bit longer and the relationship established better. You hit it off with a very dark note, one that made Vinyl kind of barely likeable. A mysoginist, that is the word I was looking for. People can hardly feel for such ponies. The whole world vs us thing was feelable, but again too short of a story to make the reader buy into it.

5.5/10

Then again, I'm just a random reader. Carry on :trollestia:

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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUGH! I very much dislike spoilers in the first comment :flutterrage:

regardless, looking forward to a good read/follow

To everyone; Omigosh Omigosh Omigosh people actually read my story! This sorry is partially based of true events in my life, thank you or reading and commenting!!! I'm so happy people actually even read it and its my first fan fic, I wrote it at two o clock am and I'll work on getting better!:pinkiehappy:

Wow! I did not even think about the whole putting derpy as cover picture thing I'm sorry:( I couldn't find any good pics of vinyl and it was getting to me, I just picked a derpy picture because there's many sad ones. I'll try and find a better one as to not ruin the story or keep people from reading it.:derpytongue2:

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