Huh ok besides bad pacing and a lot of grammar errors how are the twins the bad guys when it's shown in the game and lore they are observer's to a infinite time loop and screwing with the loop is something they wouldn't do

10110262
Because why not this is a fanfic and I find the twins to be very confusing when they pop out of nowhere

10110266
True but it's jarring to have a set of netuals suddenly be nefarious it would leave people unsure what's caused it and unless there's plans to make a one shot of events leading to songbird showing up in Equestria whic has a unique overview of them spilling there nefarious plans or songbird brining it up at some point people will be lost and confused though will admit songbird having a sense of no control over his animal instincts makes total logical sense seeing as he is now more sentient to emotions and feelings now

10110273
Don't worry I'll explain what there plans are later in the story

10110276
Ah ok lol

10094545
This is confusing me

is this dead

oh I do hope to see more soon