Teraunce, a traveller of many places, accidentally stumbles upon Equestria. How will Equestria survive him. How will he survive Equestria as he tries to find his place in a script that was never written with him in it to begin with.
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Teraunce
Dragoling that dreams of being a writer.
Teraunce
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Moth? Junebug? Are you borrowing characters from other stories?
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Maybe? or maybe other things? Don't wanna spoil anything.
Something is weird with the size of the writing in this chapter. It seems like it is about half the normal font size. Is that intentional?
Also I am liking the idea of a dragon hoarding immaterial wealth like knowledge instead of the same old boring pile of shiny stuff.
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The size of the writing is due to the formatting breaking. There are probably 300 size tags throughout. Blame me writing this first chapter in Libreoffice. I wrote the second in Google Docs. And it's more he's managed to find a way to redirect his hoarding instincts.
Going great (even if a bit fast) so far. But what happened to the equipment possessions and weapons he was carrying when he entered the portal? Are they lost does he carry some bags that weren't mentioned or are they still at the tree?
What I am missing is a bit of internal dialogue worries and thoughts of the main character. Adding something like that would also make the speed at which the story develops feel a bit less rushed.
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Right. Updated to add what happened to his equipment.
Liked this, gonna track and I look forward to more
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thanks for the compliment.
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Do you want to know?
It looks like his curse is "randomly selects a destination when not going to his home"?
Yea, if you want to explore for knowledge, that's a blessing; otherwise, every place you visit is a once-only visit.
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His curse is randomly jumping between planes, usually ending up in an awkward and sometimes dangerous situations, such as landing on top of a demon king at the top of a set of stairs and sending them both tumbling down them.
Hallo!
Don't take this the wrong way, but... do you need an editor?
This fic seems like one of the types where I'd be able to enjoy it a lot more if the writing and punctuation were just a little bit clearer, and I'd love to help with that if you want me to.
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This fic is in semi-hiatus actually. As noted by how it's been a year since an update. I do agree this needs editing. My currently worked on fic, my HP MLP one, is only receiving whatever editing Grammerly provides. I started that back when Rowling was still reputable and Scootaloo decided to spit in the face of her comments by, well, Scootaloo is a PegaLing and kinda decided she liked both.
Incidentally these stories are reflections of each other. World building in one generally applies to the other.