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Jordanwolfboy


Just a brony looking for good stories. And maybe write a few stories here and there.

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#Spoiler Warning!!! If you have not read my first story, then go and read A love that can heal your pain and then come back here!!!#

Drizzle Drop, having miraculously survived a robbery at her house that happened five years ago, finds it hard to cope with the loss of her friends. For she feels that she was partly responsible for them dying even though she couldn't do anything about it. In the midst of this, her friend Anon tries to convince her that she needs to try and live on for them. Little did they both know that their five year long friendship would blossom into something more.

Cover image drawn by my good friend Bumblebeau. Go check out his deviantart which is keitto191

"This is a what if scenario based on my first story, "A Love That Can Heal Your Pain." I hope that you all enjoy this story! :pinkiehappy:

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Yay she lives this time! Sad for the rest of her friends, but still....

The only problem I see is grammatical errors such as “Drizzles house” when you clearly meant “Drizzle‘s house.” You do this a number of times. Other then that it feels like a really good setup, can’t wait to read more. :twilightsmile:

This is a good beginning. I can't wait to see more of what's to come.

This is a great beggining. It's sad that Drizzle's friends were killed. When can I hope for more chapters?

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