• Member Since 26th Dec, 2019
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L23 amcom


A simple user that joined the fandom in 2014. I have been writing stories since December 2017.

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Title: The Second Chance.
Chapters: 12.
Genre: Slice of Life, First Person Narrative
Secondary genres: Romance (partially: Adventure and Suicide/Sad).

Story: Our protagonist (who works as a royal guard) takes a few days off and meets a sincere seapony. What does he say to her? What does he decide to do in the end? And most importantly:How does he get to know her?

Cast: 1 Canon Character,4 Original Characters.
-BlueStar*, blue unicorn (narrator, protagonist).
-Cloud Zapper*, grey pegasus.
-Stella, lilac seapony.
-Queen Novo, seapony leader.
-Yellow Earth Pony.

* Note: This story was inspired by the cover image in which BlueStar appears with the lilac seapony. This story doesn´t represent faithfully the way of acting of these characters, at least in the way their creators intended.

Timeline: MLP The Movie (around the same week, save chapters 11 and 12).
Locations: A beach (Southwest of Equestria), Canterlot, Dry Bone Desert, South Coast, Seaquestria and Manehattan.
Cover image: https://stasushka.deviantart.com/art/At-first-sight-728655112
Alternate cover image: https://www.deviantart.com/stasushka/art/Commission-for-BlueStarBrony-717727214

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 2 )

Its so sad that no one else is showing their appreciation and admiration for this story. The emotions are so good and palpable and well conveyed. Our main chatacter is really likeable and we all sympathize with him and it's great to see him find a new life and purpose in Seaquestria. Please continue this! Also, try to give Stella a bit more characterization.

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