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jesus... reading this chapter was strangely satisfying,
dis some good kush👍
Epic👍
A twink with a big twig and berries!
Surprisingly relaxing to read about this chapter.
Magnificent work. I guess you research real horse care for this beyond general description?
The details are surprisingly thoughtfulness.
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Bro translated the Swedish 💀 🤣
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Sure did. I watched videos on general horse grooming for like three hours.
Heh, she got quite bamboozled at the size of the weapon ! So we can call it a weapon of MASS destruction ! Hah !
Thank you for writing !
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You're very welcome!
I'm sure this is just me, but I swear there used to be way more chapters for this story.
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A blog post, the preview blurb, and several authors notes would agree with you. I'm doing a rewrite, old version is in ao3
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Sad. Quite enjoyed the original. Good luck with the redux!
It's probably an exaggeration, but in my head, this pink pony has become so fluffy that one breeze could steal him away like a tumble weed.
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i.postimg.cc/JnsWqFq4/cattle.jpg
He is about this fluffy rn.
I keep thinking of Flim and Flams Auto Spa, that looks just like a fully automated Car Wash, crossed with a Rotisserie.
Part of me wishes she said Ultra Bra instead, even though it makes no sense since it's a finnish band and not a swedish one.
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I genuinely can't tell if this is a cow or not, why is it THAT fluffy?!?
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Because her owners shampooed her ^^.
"Ahhhhh, I see. Well, Mister Tint, rest assured we will ensure you look your absolute best by the end of your time here. Komma! We have much to do with you.”
He's just going to say nothing to that . Cuz I saw that as a backhand comment out of no where lol.
promote healthy and thick hair and fur growth, and well…to make you smell nice.”
Then this would have been the point I would be Self conscience about everything Especially after the undercarriage Pause.
Lovin it! Great job honestly
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That's absolutely amazing, and needs to become common practice for cow maintenance
I am throughly pleased and somehow relaxed a bit myself after this chapter. Great job!
Honestly the attention to detail for general equine care is a nice touch.
Looking forward to part 2.
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I am glad you are enjoying ^^
I WANT MORE CHAPTERS. Also 10/10 keep going
Well that’s different. Hopefully they don’t use mint toothpaste. I hate mint and mint flavored stuff!!! I only like mint on my hair.
So I noticed it in earlier chapters but tend to read while offline so didn't leave comments or take notes but you do a lot of unnecessary capitalisation, things like second words in a sentence I noticed occur quite a few times in a previous chapter and a bunch in this one.
For things like this, compare it to real world elements. You wouldn't capitalise words like eyes, hooves etc like this
Should be as Mayor Mare has requested, or as Mayor Mare requested
I'd have to go back and check but this is the kind of thing I was talking about earlier, capitalising the second word in a sentence unnecessarily
I hope I'm not coming across as too harsh and I want you to know I do really like your story, both the previous version and this rewrite
Considering the end of the last chapter, and the red tags (which I had honestly forgotten), I only have one thing to say: have mercy on this poor guy