This story is a sequel to Afternoon Nap
These Are Stories of ponies or creatures taking afternoon naps.
Lots of Cuteness to Ensue.
This Is a Sequel to my last post afternoon nap. but this time, I'm creating a series of fics of characters napping in the afternoon.
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In all honesty, they're a bit hard to read to enjoy properly. I might suggest getting a hold of someone to proofread and edit the stories for you, since the whole idea does seem to have some promise.
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Don't worry, I'm planning to edit it soon.
meanwhile, a businesspony by the name of catch n release plopped down a box of bait and tackle, resting on that same pristine pond, ready to start fishing, he does not notice fluttershy sleeping, as this was his three day weekend, he was planning to spend that time doing what he loved best, fishing. he sat there near the water, with his bait and tackle, placing the worm on the hook to catch the fish.
at that time, he noticed the mane six climbing over to the floatie, catch, feeling honored to be on the same pond as the the one they were on, however he noticed something odd going on with the six ponies who had saved his land many times over
"oh my word" catch said to himself "they just fell asleep right there on the floatie, this is unusual" the fisherman figured he would take his boat out to figure out what was going on, so he pushed his little dinghy into the water, got into the rocking boat, and picked up his oars, navigating the small boat through the still waters, as he was rowing, he felt a strange calm over the entire pond, he all of the sudden felt a little drowsy, his eyelids grew heavy, as if he could almost fall asleep, but a fish jumped up from the pond, and slapped him right in the face before he could succumb to the serenity. finally he made it to the floatie, he figure he'd try to wake them up, "twilight, twilight, ms. sparkle, wake up!!" the fisherman prodding at the lavender unicorn, his pushing became slower and slower, the boat acting like a cradle for the fisherpony, "twilight....twi...liiiight" he once again nearly fell asleep, falling backwards over the boat and into the water, wich sent him right back up, flailing his hooves trying desperately to get back on the boat. he manage to gain some ground and decided he would find someone who could help, luckily, he knew a mystical zebra who was an expert in this field.....
meanwhile, our resident fisherpony lead zecora to where the mane six had fallen asleep, he showed her the sleeping six who somehow couldn't be awoken by any sound "...and i tried everything zecora, i tried yelling i tried bird calling, i even used this here air horn but nothings working, do you know anything about this" he asked very concerned for equestrias biggest names "my pony friend, no need to threat, for this body of water is no threat, this pond is known to put those in trances, their dreams are full of songs and dances." zecora explained in her rhyming style "hmmmmm" catch considered "so what your saying is, these ponies fell asleep because of the pond there, that would explain why i nearly fell unconscious earlier " zecora and catch shared a light hearted laugh at the circumstance "and thats why i see you smelling a fish, looking for a delightful dish" catch then quickly responded "i love that rhyme but its not the time, is there anything we can do about this" zecora shook her head and said, "we must let nature take it course, would be foolish to try by force. but one may assist in guiding the dream, offer guidance as you will see" the pony thought to himself how come i understood all of that?
"well, my mother always told me that dreams have a way of coming true, now that i think of it, we could have a bit of fun with this" catch considered "say zecora, do you have a record player at home" "why yes i do, in fact i have two" "great" said the fisherpony "lets go get it, and play some music while they're sleeping, give them something to do" zecora was perplexed by the plan, but zecora, being in high spirits that day, decided to go along with it
all the while, catch n release and zecora were having a blast, dancing to old records, and chatting the night, wich was having an effect on the dreams of the six sleepyheads, they were also enjoying some apple cider catch had purchased from sweet apple acres earlier that day. the two not even aware of the time, the two even going out for a midnight swim, of course, each had to keep waking up the other in order to keep themselves from sleeping and , subsequently drowning.
meanwhile catch n release and zecora basked in the morning sun as it shown over the sleeping ponies, the two stretched out over beach towels, catch then turned to zecora and asked "say zecora, how long does this sleeping pond spell take" "judging by this narcotic power, id say it stays for a 24th hour" zecora said in her usual flawless rhyme "wonder if all those records we played last night affected their dreams?" catch asked "what the heck ,lets check" zecora responded. so catch and zecora made their way out to that "sleepy hollow" and they heard...
catch and zecora bobbed their heads to the songs being formed from the lips of the unconscious ponies. enjoying these new tunes being brought forward to them.
catch and release put his hoof out, as did zecora as they bumped hooves, for they knew these were special dreams, dreams that would later manifest into reality
catch and zecora took turns splashing water on each other to keep falling asleep,they barely managed to stay awake through the lullabye, as the all nighter they had pretty much wrecked them, but they didnt care.
zecora had successfully predicted they had a couple minutes before the ponies woke completely up, so, catch n release, who by the way, had caught a fish and shared it with his zebra friend, decided to sing a song that his mother would sing to him every morning as he woke up, catch n release firmly believed in making dreams in reality, and what better motivation than a song.
To dream the impossible dream
To fight the unbeatable foe
To bear with unbearable sorrow
To run where the brave dare not go
To right the un-rightable wrong
To love pure and chaste from afar
To try when your arms are too weary
To reach the unreachable star
This is my quest,
To follow that star
No matter how hopeless,
No matter how far.
To fight for the right
Without question or pause,
To be willing to march
Into hell for a heavenly cause.
And I know if I'll only be true
To this glorious quest
That my heart will lie peaceful and calm
When I'm laid to my rest
And the world will be better for this
And one man, sore and covered with scars
Still strove with his last ounce of courage
To fight the unbeatable foe
To reach the unreachable star
with that last note.....
"hey guys" catch shouted from over on the boat near the floatie "sweet dreams i presume, ones that have begun in the womb" zecora rhymed again, how do i understand that catch thought to himself
"oh, hey you two" pinkie answered excitedly "how long have you two been there!?"
"since you two began your nap" catch said "who knew that there was a pond out here that make ponies sleepy, i tried to wake you up at first, but i nearly drowned trying that, zecora here told me about the pond, so we've been up all night partying, playing records, singing, fishing, swimming" "yes, we had a lovely time, to act on impulse with no reason or rhyme" zecord mused
"well, were awake now" starlight said "but you two definitely look like you need some beauty rest
"de-de-defintly, starlight gliiiiiiiiiimeeeeeeer" the groggy pony said as he fell backwards from the boat onto the floatie
"we couldn't agree more, thats what sleepings foooooooooooooorrrrrrr" zecora likewise fell asleep before hitting the comfy duck floatie"
"awww, would ya look at that" applejack cooed "theyre so plum tuckered out watching over us". fluttershy picked up a blanket and put it over the two sleeping creatures, now ready to give THEM the rest THEY deserved.
Suddenly they all noticed it's the afternoon so Finally, They all got out of the floatie. then, Fluttershy and the others went back to fluttershy's cottage. to start working on a musical they thought of in their dream. months later they released the completed musical on bridleway, and received smash hit reviews. live your dreams everypony. goodnight