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You mixed up ancestors and descendants.
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Gonna fix that, thank you.
I just realized. The way the places are named... Anon lives in the same world as One Punch Man. Or, a very close parallel to it.
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It´s a way to make it an everytown, so that people can identify themselves with it. F-city is based on the city I actually live in, some stuff is changed for creative freedom, but if you live in the city you will recognize a lot.
I've read only the first chapter yet, but so far I'm enjoying this story as much as your last one
There's happening something entertaining all the time and there are a lot of sweet moments.
And your human Celly is very sexy
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I have a guess...
Is the name of the river "M-River"?
If yes, then you live in the same country as me
So, your version of Cozy Glow is Baby Doll (Batman: The Animated Series) instead of Darla Dimple (Cats Don't Dance).
I am worried for when a fanfic is written of those 3 characters meeting.
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Thank you very much!
I´m happy you enjoy it. Please keep me updated on how you liked the other chapters.
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Yes, Cozy always gave a a Babydoll vide, so I rolled with it.
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Stimmt genau.
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For ponies from Reinland, your Equestrian is quite good.
;)
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I'll do
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Geil
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Well, close enough.
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Alright, I'm all caught up. I remember this from the land of green and I was enjoying it. I haven't been in that thread in a long, long time. Last thing I remember were some events of Chapter 4, I think. The rest is all new to me. So you've brought these three baddies along with some interesting bit of lore. Curious. I'm really liking the Celly & Anon shipping. I might have mentioned back in the greens that I'm hoping they become more than just "Friends with benefits". I still feel that way and more so now with that last bit of lore reveal. Thank you very much for bring your story here. I look forward to seeing where the story goes.
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Thank you very much!
I added the Legion of Doom because, well, I wanted to give them a different ending. I wanted to give them a chance to start over, maybe even a happy end. I have Tirek and Chryssie so far figured out, but I´m still struggleing with Cozy. I also have some plans for Anon and Celly, don´t worry.
Nice!
One aspect, that I especially liked about "Celly vs. Anon's parents" is how smart she acts.
What I mean is, that what she does to solve the problems really feels smart. It really makes sense.
And in this chapter she's doing it again.
That's my Celly!
Sehr schön
Ok i do love the premise of this story but it feels kinda rushed, might wanna comb through your chapters a few times for errors and maybe try to lengthen the chapters out as a whole. Otherwise its a great start.
Edit: okay, at chapter 4, i cannot in good graces continue, this story feels incredibly rushed, not along with the forced romance, along with Celestia being in heat too, it just all seems much with in the first 4 chapters. Please I'm begging you, comb over the chapters again. Things lime "beautyfull", or "recless", along the un-spaced words are really taking me out of the story. Don't get me wrong i love the premise, but thr execution needs a lot of work. I can see this story getting featured. Just please... PLEASE edit your stuff
Hallo und Entschuldigung, dass ich mich so lange nicht gemeldet habe.
Ich wollte sagen, dass ich diese Story immer noch sehr mag und ich hoffe, dass du sie weiterführen wirst.
Die sexuellen Sachen sind zwar nicht so mein Ding, aber sie stören mich auch nicht. Ich finde es toll, wie du andauernd etwas neues passieren lässt und bin sehr gespannt darauf, wie es sich mit den Bösewichten weiterentwickelt.
Ich will dich natürlich nicht drängen, aber ich würde mich freuen, wenn es weiter geht. Ich kenne zwar nicht die Gründe, warum es lange nicht weiter ging, aber falls es die Dislikes sind:
Lass dich davon nicht abschrecken. Die sind nur da, weil die Leute prüde sind XD
Du hast zumindest einen treuen Fan :-)