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Ashley Natter
Kinky writer with a heart of gold! A literal heart of gold, sitting on her desk, somehow it is still pumping blood... Anyone needs a heart of gold?
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Just an bat pony doing bat pony things.
Sounds like fun!
If Love Bite can gain nutrients from lust she may be fat by the time they reach the dock...
Sounds about right!
Just at the beginning of this chapter I was wondering when/if that guy will show up again...
I guess I just got the answer.
Question: Can't they just call the Equestrian planetary forces and explain everything?
From what I understood he is an officer there so they could probably call him back.
I would expect sthe planetary police would try to prevent an open battle on the planet; in their very own interest.
The bounty hunters may cause more damage than the bounty itself is worth.
Good idea! No matter what the bounty hunters will do, they won't risk hurting Velvet. Because then they can forget the bounty.
Good story so far! Just like the prequel.
I look forwards to see what happens next.
Edit: What?! Where are all the other comments?
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Bounty Hunters are usually civilian contractors, more often than not they only have disruption and paralysis spells, your regular bounty is put upon highjackers and cargo thieves. Those explosive spells were military-grade, supplied by Midnight Spell.
They certainly will try to explain everything, once they are safely behind the walls of an Embassy, where they can't be snatched away by corrupted officers
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Back when I started this story, I knew I wanted to write a small scene like that and I'm glad I could put it in XD
Aren't they called "Niriks" instead of "Nirins?"
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You are right, I'll change it right away!
FOUND A FAIR ERROR THERE.
that in a paragraph above say hoof and in the following hands, it confuses you when you read
And I thought those Equestrians would be the good guys, and they were only mislead because they should he was an kidnapper.
Any surprise she ran away from him?
Should keep him from getting away with the ship.
Even if it seems now he won't need it anyway.
So, finally got around to read the rest of the story.
Good work!
I enjoyed reading it.
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