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Ashley Natter


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Balefire bathed the land.

There were, of course, survivors…

The cities were scorched with weapons of untold power, the very land was soaked with poison, but the world was not destroyed, just a way of life. The first deaths numbered in the millions, but the death toll during the next year was even more staggering as ponies struggled to find water, food, and shelter amidst the ruins of the civilization.

In what had once been North Equestria, the survivors fought to prevail in a new age of sickness, balefire, barbarism and desperation. There were days of seemingly endless night, eerily lit by the glow of the pegasi’s cities burning in the sky. And then the sky was closed, blanketed by thick clouds that heralded an endless winter. Fetid swamps infected with magical radiation created new and terrible life forms. Windigo’s storms hurtled across the landscape with enough strength to level entire cities, and when by some freak chance a storm cloud swept in from the sea, it was warped, putrid rain that fell—balefire tainted water that stripped a pony to the bones in seconds of shrieking agony.

In isolated pockets, ponies survived and struggled against terrible odds.

Underground, ponies retreated into the safety of Stables and hoped to outlast the apocalypse.

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Comments ( 6 )

Now, I haven't actually read the story yet, but what's the plot? The synopsis tells us nothing.

The first deaths numbered in the millions, but the death tool (toll) during the next year was even more staggering as ponies struggled to find water, food, and shelter amidst the ruins of the civilization.
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Haven't red it yet, but sounds like MLP meets On the Beach, or some other of those cheery (sarcasm) post apocalypse novels from the 1950s

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Its a short adventure on the Wasteland short after the bombs, a band of legionnaires crosses into Equestria trying to get into one of the Stables to survive, but they are faced with remmants of the Night Guard.

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I can't lie, I kinda grew up with those books so its probably have some influence on it.

Angrily he tugged his thick scarf over his mouth and pulled down his fur cap so that only his amber eyes faced the gusting snow. Sitting on his haunches, waiting while the stragglers in the Centuria crossed the trackless terrain, he took out a hoof-rolled cigarette and pressed it against the amber stones of his rifle to light it up. His rifle was an old and well-maintained Dragunov-571, the weapon of choice of the Special Forces and infiltrators, Unathi’s version of the rifle had lost its suppressor a long time ago, but the legionnaire had replaced it with a muzzle break for better accuracy. Built into (in) the factories of Kinsagani, the weapon was the pinnacle of zebra’s ingenuity and technology, capable of imbuing its bullets with magical fire and capable of a staggering rate of fire in full auto or three rounds bursts.

The strange pony had been too well feed, (fed) too clean, and so happy. He seemed almost like a relic from a distant past, something too beautiful and pure for the world they now lived.

Though the day was bleak, with flurries of snow reducing visibility, they had seen much worse. Occasionally a cursed tornado came screaming from the north, the spirits of cold and wind strong enough to drive a zebra crazy or peel the flesh from their bones. Biggers (Bigger) creatures had been seen rounding the poisoned forests even as the trees died, demons and abominations that devoured whole zebras in a single bite. The ragged Centuria had seen the remains of dozens of villages and outposts, zebras that had been devoured by the inclement weather or the deadly Winter Wolves.

The weather is getting colder by the day as the old engine moves relentlessly trough snow covered tracks, going North through rocky passes and under the shadow of ice cliffs, under a sky perpetually covered in clouds, chasing the fragmented remains of faint radio transmission that promises the Cristal (Crystal) Empire haven’t (hasn't) been hit, that in the high north there’s safety and shelter. Midnight Reverie is perched on the small watch tower built in the last wagon, her right hoof rests over the handles of her submachine guns that rest across her lap. The big MS-7 10 mm submachine gun had been part of her standard gear in the night guard, but like all of her gear it has gone through rough times in the last years, being repaired with any parts available and weathered the harsh conditions of surviving in this new world. Not so unlike herself.

“Tartarus take me,” Midnight Reverie curses under her breath, they usually had to deal with raiders of ghouls holed (or ghouls holed up in) in the station, once they had even fought some crazy cultists, but this was a first.

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