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Within me, I carry the memories of the Empire, transported to a less noble age. Ave Caesar! Ave Mithras!

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Starlight Glimmer is a reformed cult leader who still struggles with social interaction.

Cozy Glow struggles to figure out this friendship business.

Who helps who?

(A/N-This is an AU take that plays with the idea that the Cozy from Marks For Effort was the real Cozy. School Raze never happened.)

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(A/N-This is an AU take that plays with the idea that the Cozy from Marks For Effort was the real Cozy. School Raze never happened.)

So... You're going to explain the foreshadowing that there's something off about her how, exactly?

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All will be revealed. This Cozy still has a dark side.

Very good chapter and I look forward to seeing what you have planned for Cozy Glow. Especially with that hint of her still having a dark side.

Kind of curious if you plan to change how Cozy seemed to help Twilight quite a bit in season 8's later episodes. I don't know if she was ever officially Twilight's helper in some way or not.

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The one genuine thing about Cozy's character is that she enjoys helping others (even if it's helping them take over the world.) So that will stay as part of her character and she will remain "friendship assistant."

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Hopefully without the taking over the world part this time.

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Ask me again if it worked after a few chapters. I don't give it out after just one.

And then she killed them and hid the bodies. :rainbowlaugh:

I kid. Nice, sweet AU.

Very intrigued. This is a fairly unique idea, and I want to see more of what this story does.

It was Cozy's turn to look around awkwardly in an attempt to find something other than directly at Starlight. "He's, um, a griffon."

Hello double racial memory. Pony wise, because if you know your Griffon in mythology, they eat horses. Or ponies more likely in this case.

And I also like to think its Cozy's Pegasus heritage talking. Who knows how they view griffons. Heck, how do we know Rainbow and Gilda's friendship wasn't abnormal to both species?

This has good detail to it, was well written, and I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Edit: Cozy feels in character for the most part as far as her act goes so it will be interesting to see how much of her persona remains the same.

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This Cozy has parents while cannon Cozy was an orphan according to Big Jim. That'll make a difference.

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Sounds interesting, I look forward to seeing what you wind up writing.

9970849
will you update this again?

I hope you'll continue this story some day. I really like the premise, and Cozy has a lot of room for creating intriguing backstories and motivations.

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Sorry, folks, probably not as I've lost interest in writing Ponyfics.

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I'll be sorry to see it go. Regardless I wish you well in your future endeavors.

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