A Near Miss

TA Long Shot
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Slice of Life
Near Miss can't die, Long Shot pulls off million-to-one odds, and Spleens is... Spleens. They now set out in their caravan to Gallifrey gorge
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Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Oct 23rd, 2019 · 1 · 2 · Chapter 6 ·

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

Near Miss

Near Miss #2 · Oct 29th, 2019 · · · Chapter 6 ·

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I'm really not so sure about Near Miss, but Long Shot has a very slightly raspy voice with an occasional fang based lisp when she's not paying attention.

True Edge

True Edge #3 · Nov 25th, 2019 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Liked for the AppleDash and the formerly haunted Trixiemobile.

True Edge

True Edge #4 · Nov 25th, 2019 · · · Chapter 4 ·

Annnnnd Faved!

True Edge

True Edge #5 · Nov 25th, 2019 · · · Chapter 9 ·

"It's a pre-equestrian grundle tickler. I have the location narrowed down to a single cave system in the Badlands."

True Edge

True Edge #6 · Nov 25th, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 12 ·

"Not dying is part of it, but my talent also seems to include creating the situations with the possibility of death to luck my way out of. As such I've gotten pretty good at making things go boom," Near explained. She then glanced over to some hilltops around a kilo trot away. When Long followed her gaze, several of the hilltops exploded in sequence as Near nodded her head in time with the explosions. Near then emitted a jet of flames from her horn, after which she launched a flaming missile which struck and exploded upon a nearby tree. Near Miss finished her display with several rapid fire but relatively small explosions on the ground around twenty trots in front of them before blowing away a small waft of smoke from her horn.

Tim? Is that you?

True Edge

True Edge #7 · Nov 25th, 2019 · · · Chapter 13 ·

I would say that you should probably spell it “Kilotrot”, all one word, if you’re trying to ponify a “Kilometer”.

True Edge

True Edge #8 · Nov 25th, 2019 · · · Chapter 19 ·

YES! THIS SHALL BE THE GREATEST PARTY OF ADVENTURERS EVER!

True Edge

True Edge #9 · Nov 25th, 2019 · · · Chapter 20 ·

Fuuuck me, Long, you’re a sexy Bat Pone, but grow a fucking filter!

True Edge

True Edge #10 · Nov 26th, 2019 · · · Chapter 21 ·

I vote South! The anomaly sounds interesting.
I mean, they both sound interesting, but I'm curious what's up with that.

True Edge

True Edge #11 · Nov 28th, 2019 · 1 · · Chapter 23 ·

GIven her history with heaters, I’m still not feeling too confident, here. XD Also, I’m getting the sense that you are a fellow fan of a certain drunken “analyst” (don’t tell him I called him that, for the love of Luna’s teats!) on YouTube.

Near Miss