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She finally realizing that actions have consequences and that she can't just shoot her mouth off whenever she feels like it. Maybe she go to ponyville and say sorry for what she said. She shouldn't have deciding what he should feel about getting bopped for escaping even if the guard was worried.
So when's Bullwinkle showing up?
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ayo? possible cameo?
I love this, keep up the great work!
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Well we have the flying squirrel.
if he forgives the ponies again its his own stupid fault when they inevitably screw him over a fourth time
nicely done!
I really hope that Toby doesn’t take Luna back.
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Even if she apologizes, the damage is done. He has been assaulted and his home has been vandalized as a result of her actions.
No person, including those who suffer trauma, can forget such things.
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I agree. Staying with her and the other ponies will just cause more of this stuff to happen.
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True but it might undo some of the damage because they think they are helping princess Luna. Truthfully I thought ponies needed a scolding for the whole we listened to rumors and brought the windgos and a reminder that they shouldn't listen to rumors. But no that was shoved aside in order to celebrate the win.
Rocky and Bullwinkle must have been Toby's favorite TV show growing up.
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This is gonna go soooooo sideways, I can just SEEE it! The ponies are stubborn and with how fixed in their ways they are I don’t see them turning a new leaf on him.
To the author, I am not hating on Luna herself but just her actions and her own stupidity. If I were in Toby’s shoes, I wouldn’t take her back as she has proven to be loose lipped and as uncaring as the rest. She has broken the heart once though her actions, can she be trusted not to do so again? I wouldn’t gamble on that and more so with her influence.
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winner for the best take so far lmaooo
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I hate to be that guy, but...
we shall see it ain't over til it's over
I hope Toby bitch slaps Luna back to the damn moon. If he takes her back he's the personification of a doormat and simp.
A real rollercoaster this one.
The characters are difficult to get a stable opinion on,like, you don't know if you should like, dislike, love or hate them
Let's just say they go up and down
a lot with the way they act
Still like the story, gonna wait for the next update. see you then!
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that's the whole point of having a plotline. I think people are assuming that I don't have one for this story and they are heavily mistaken
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Your sarcasm is unwarranted and quite frankly immature. I don't leave comments to put people down, I leave comments out of concern for the quality.
As I said before, I want to like this story but as I listed I just can't. And with that attitude I'll take it as a sign of the lack of improvement for the foreseeable future.
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lol aight
your comment wasn't a put-down per se, but it was still kinda pointless. No need to make a big deal about it if you dislike the story, because I don't care either way. We all have our preferences. Reading that comment wasted ten seconds of my life that could have been better used for something like picking my nose
your reaction was pretty funny too ngl
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Which is true and makes wonder in understanding why this man is developping even harder trust issues.
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Unfortunately beyond nightmares they don't seem much mental health care. And despite the fact they knew he was sentient they used protocol for an excuse to put him in the dungeon and twilight should have stood up to Luna right away instead of waiting because then he would trust her more.
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Oh I know for a fact you have a plot line, but the fun of a story comes from trying to guess what is gonna happen next and rage at the characters for their stupidity!
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They likely have other health care (both medical and Psychological) but the issue is the species gap, because he isn’t a Pony I highly doubt any respectable medical professional would see him, let alone treat him properly simply due to the pony’s Xenophobia.
I fully expect him to explode at Luna and tell her he never wants to see her again and all that, I also expect Luna to Run away from the situation and stay away from him simply because she doesn’t know how to handle Relationships and all the minutiae that it involves.
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Considering how twilight has anxiety issues and nobody has ever suggested she see a doctor and considering if mental health issues were common surely those close to her would have suggested seeing a doctor long ago. And Luna is definitely in need of friends to help her master relationships and considering she hardly sees twilight and friends they aren't much help. I don't think they really understand mental health issues considering twilight herself said people are like ponies emotionally. But they have lived in peace so long and anything that goes wrong well it usually takes no time for to be wrapped up and solved so not many ponies are going to worry about it. Twilight and friends will handled it before the week is over.
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Actually she has neurosis (she shows multiple symptoms of multiple versions) and her reading obsession is likely what they chose for her cognitive behavioral therapy to focus her mind.
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Actually that could be just because she a bookworm. Lots of folks are bookworms without it having anything to do with a medical condition.
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True, but then again she is hyper focused to the point that she sometimes doesn’t eat and relies on information from books more than she should.
All I am saying is they have SOME Type of Mental Healthcare, even if it’s decades behind our own. Hell for all we know, pony minds work differently from Humans in matters revolving psychological damage. After all, Twilight has an irrational fear of Quesadilla’s due to burning cheese and yet seems fine.
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Day 17, still no update in sight. Can only hope for one soon, else unending need will befound me soon.
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A homie needs motivation lmao
When the next part?
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when you stop asking
I really want Luna to reconcile with Toby, but I don't know how Toby will react, does he want to stay alone or not? Without Peace and the store's undergoing renovation, he'll be alone in his house and probably wants company.
However, Toby might still be mad and would not trust her anymore after his previous trust that he gave Luna was broken not by cheating or using him for her own benefit, but by a drunken rant, that caused him to be harassed and ostracised by everypony but Fluttershy and Minty.
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Hell naw, Luna f***** up badly. Plus, I really frickin hate the rest for being racist/xenophobic p*****. Hope they all get karma, and Toby gives them a middle finger.
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The joy of the readers