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Nice! He deserves a good time. And good Pinkie fourth wall break
Ok thx now I wont look for this every 12hrs XD really good story
See you next year!
Well this chapter killed my interest
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Welp - thanks for playing.
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Same to you, friend!
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Бляяять, Ленин был её инициатором. И народ за ним по следовал. После того как прошла революция и установился коммунизм, было трое претендентов(не слишком помню) на главу партии. Сталин их всех либо убил, либо выгнал из СССР. Даже Ленин сказал, что Сталина не надо ставить на главу СССР. Ну а потом в 30е годы он начал проводить репрессии.
Спасибо за главу
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Репрессивный или нет. По крайней мере, Сталин не был так восприимчив к ледорубам, как Троцкий.
И разве лидер не должен быть самым способным? Индустриализация огромной аграрной нации и приведение ее к статусу сверхдержавы требует жертв! И нация оставалась стабильной до самой смерти. И даже после этого!
I honestly liked this chapter, though I have this feeling still that this is all heading for the drain at hyper speed.
Also, while he may not be interested YET I can see it developing later on down the line.
I know he hasn’t REALLY forgiven most of them Though and I can’t wait to see the beat down that Rainbow is going to get!
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I sadly in a way feel that too.
Same, I like how he took it realistically in a way. Still want to know why Luna feels that way to towards him so strongly honestly but well see. Without I doubt I can see it coming but glad it didn't happen at light speed.
To be honest, I hope he gives her a talking to of in someway for payback for the beat-down. Only mare enough to beat up someone in shackles.
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Я не против Сталина, но просто репрессии были херовыми для людей. Хотя вот знаешь на кого нужно злиться? НА ПУТИНА!! Я ненавижу его политику, и то что он со своими дружками делаю со страной! Ты видил как мы живём? Хреново! Всё из-за экономики нашей "прекрасной" страны.
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И кстати, ты шо русский? Если так, то смешно. Так как я тоже пишу на английском, когда пишу комментарии тут.
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Нет, мой друг, я не русский. Но надеюсь моя речь не страшная. В любом случае, вы правы насчет Путина. Он не делает ничего, кроме причинения вреда России, и вы не сможете защитить это, если не произойдет значительного роста. Хотя Россия очень симпатичная нация, если она не охвачена промышленностью, нет?
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Жаль, хотел увидеть своего советского комрада(. Природа России прекрасна, если бы она была человеком, я бы её выебал. Не бойся, то что ты писал было нормальным. Да, Путен уебан! Вот бы уехать в Америку...
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Большинству довольно трудно добраться до США. В любом случае, было приятно поговорить с тобой.
Gangsta's paradise
I must point out, for someone from the Mid to Late Sixties, he doesn't speak like it other then maybe a few slang words here and there.
This is turning out great so far! With Toby being someone who didn’t belong in war, I wonder how someone who became conditioned to it like the Green Berets in Vietnam were would compare here. I assume you’ve read “The Things They Carried” as there are some similarities between this story and that one, imagine kinda like how the green berets in that book were portrayed.
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Honestly, that's one of the hardest parts about writing this. I've been doing research, but this is one of those things where you'd have to be more familiar with that time frame.
Unfortunately, I don't really consider myself familiar. Educated, maybe, but not familiar.
I do enjoy this story, but my biggest issue is Luna. The way you right her is ok, but the love part is unrealistic. From what you've written these feelings started almost instantly upon her seeing him and not understanding her emotions has a hardened reaction to him. However since that first meeting she has only met him a few times since then.
While she has learned more about his past it's 90% of it is not through interactions with him, but from Fluttershy, Twilight and the female guard.
I'm not bashing the story or the author, but the emotions being shown by Luna aren't realistic even by the show's standards at times. Perhaps if she had more interactions with him between her getting the crush to this confession it would improve the story more. Maybe when the author has time they will be able to work on that aspect.
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And this will all be addressed soon, I promise. That's one problem about in-progress stories - it's hard for readers to see the writer's line of thinking - which is both nice and annoying at the same time.
Good to see toby doesnt go straight into liking her back. Would be fake af
And here I thought Clarity would be the love interest... Dang...
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that would make sense
Should I be concerned with Pinkies iNSaNiTy.
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Don't worry fella, it's realistic, last time I liked a girl I smashed her head off the monkey bars and almost drowned her in a sand pit.
Regular shows of affection you know.
Mom says I become more like dad every day.
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That leaves me with... so many questions... And I'm not sure if I want the answers...
To be honest, I want to like this fic but there are a lot of problems with it. Character inconsistencies, questionable and frustrating decisions by said characters (for the wrong reasons), story is all over the place, and to brutally honest; inaccurate depiction of PTSD. (And don't get me started on the many grammatical errors).
Sorry but I can't in good conscience continue this fic.
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damn, I'm absolutely crippled. There is no coming back from this. I've hit rock bottom. You've disliked my fanfic. I can't believe this. My life is ruined. Now I gotta sell all my dogecoin and live in a cardboard box knowing that I didn't get your approval on a fanfic.
(I could not resist against an opportunity like this)
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Has Toby actually had a PTSD episode in this whole story, apart from some dreams? To my knowledge that tends to branch off to spacing out with bouts of memories and anxiety, spontaneous emotional outbursts, among other things. All we’ve seen is him reacting to whatever everybody else is doing around or to him, and wanting to be left alone.
In any case, I can agree I feel like Toby went from rock bottom to at least stable way too quick, and I don’t really understand why the writer went to the direction of Luna having a love interest with him. I can get feeling guilty, but what made her fall in love with Toby? Usually there’s a sequence of events that lead to those feelings, but that didn’t really happen, and it’s not like either of them did anything together to warrant those feelings in the first place.
I’m not throwing trash on the author, it’s just my two cents, and I’ll keep reading.
bullshit