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LET'S fUCKING GOOOOO
Ah, thanks for keeping the story alive :)
I read this fic months ago and since it's now active again might as well give my thoughts on one thing that annoyed me the most, the so called romance between Luna and Tobias. You went to great lengths in the beginning to have Luna bully and torture him for no good reason both directly and indirectly. The big thing being her placing Rainbow Dash, the least likely pony to be able to handle something like this, to interrogate him, leading him try to and commit suicide. Then you reveal that she loves him somehow, which I call bullshit. There's no way anyone would and could do that to someone they love and if they do they don't deserve it. Yet, you decide to have Toby love her back. It really pisses me off that you had Luna do all that, with a completely idiotic reason, that should be the opposite and even had the gull to have Toby love the one that is responsible for all the torture he went through since arriving in Equestria. They shouldn't be together period. Even worst is you know this and had Toby point this out and you still had them be together. Everything else though is kind of average for Hie fics and if it wasn't due to that stupid romance with Luna, I might have even favorite this.
AHAHAHAHAHA ITS ALIVE THE PROMISED DAY HAS COME
I HAVE BEEN WAITING 1 YEAR AND 4 MONTHS FOR THIS MOMENT
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I'm glad to know that the fate of my happiness rests on whether or not you favorite this story. :)
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You got a chuckle and a like out of me lol.
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Oh and fyi I do wish you luck on this fic even if I don't enjoy it as much as others. I just wanted to get one thing that bothered me about it off my chest. Keep writing it how you like.
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Thank you, good sir! Honesty is better than being fake lol
Am I hallucinating right now or is there a new chapter!
Seeing this story with a new chapter literally brought my day from bad to TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE!
Skimming through the later chapters reminded me how annoying Twilight is in this fic. I can tell she actually cares and wants to help Toby. She is just going about it the wrong way. I found myself frustrated by how pushy she can be and how she fails to understand how he feels about his situation. Even downplaying Luna's and to a lesser extend Celestia's initial actions at one point. Worst of all is how she fails to see her ways aren't helping and could make things worst. Hopefully she learns how to better help Toby in the future. I guess I will stick around and keep reading, as I don't like to leave stories unfinished. I'll see where it goes.
nicely done!
Ive just got into this story now comes the wait for more good things.
I don’t see why there should be a problem with the main characters having religious beliefs. If you write it well (as to say not make it look like you’re not sponsoring the religion or anything) I think it makes HiE characters more human. Fiction writers (in general) don’t do this very often (usually for good reason) but I think it adds more to the flavor of the story. Whether the main character is Christian, Atheist or Hindu shouldn’t really matter if the story is worth reading.
Wait until you read the book of numbers.
Trigger warnings for Christian stuff? What has society come too…
Oh noooo clarity? Clearity? Idk why been kept in dark so mean