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They make such a adorable, if awkward, couple and I wish them the best of luck!
They are honestly helping each other faster then I thought possible!
Don’t worry, I like the ending. It was good
I think it's sweet.
Its fine, i Love it!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
It is very nice to see how things are smoothing out :) And like everyone else said: the ending is good. :)
Hey, what happened to that guard pony he made friends with? Any chance she'll come back?
Seeing as he's on the healing process, what about Clarity? Considering in his own words she was someone he trusted, and was one of the first he opened up to, you'd think he'd have some sort of epiphany since he threw himself off the cliff in front of her.
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Don't worry, she hasn't disappeared from the plotline. 🙃
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To be blunt, you've put a lot more thought into these specific details than I have, but also consider:
- Would they add to or affect the overall theme of the story?
- Would they take away from the main points being made in each chapter?
(To be fair, though, I did exaggerate the level of harshness that Toby was treated with.) With all that aside, thanks for the input! I love reading all these little critiques - if one can't accept criticism, they lose their ability to grow.
I kept thinking about the FBI meme whenever this line shows up.
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4wX2xBOuzRg
Yuk it up furballs