Page generated in 0.023 seconds
Total duration
1,032 users online
41,081 hits today, 2,156,967 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Ho-LEE FUCK dude. Looking forward to reading more of this shit...
Very nice work! You showed how difficult it can be. I can't blame Toby, it happens if the stress becomes too much. Thought, I wonder what the story behind Marietta is.
Very good so far. Nice to see someone use a uncommon car as well, seeing as I have a '65 Covair Corsa Turbo
9820421
I'd wolf-whistle for ya, but I'm depressingly lack skill in that area
9820317
Hello there.
[visible confusion]
9829795
Don't worry he's has the phone part wrong by three years.
Oh fuck me, I thought it said wakanda for a sec there
9955168
WAKANDA FOEVA
9820317
PTSD is a bitch. You watch that shit destroy people because they can't get help because of a broken system.
My mother served and got sent to afghanistan. She came back but after a while everything snowballed to the point she disowned me while I was enlisted as she thought she was being hunted.
She lives out in a tent in the Arizona desert.
She wasn't even infantry, woman was a Chaplin. She was awesome. I'm the end it was the things she had seen, suffered, and did that brought her down.
PTSD is a beast.
9829909
I just took it that in this story there is a bit of a sliding ruler when it comes to civilian tech level.
10908530
I am no genius on the technology of that era, and I have done more than enough research for various things that I honestly don't care about petty details like that.
If people wanna get mad at me for that, I'll glue their buns together with gorilla glue.
Yep, I thought this was going to be good.
I do feel like the year should be changed to be honest. Either a more modern date or leave it ambiguous. I've noticed Toby seems more like he's from the modern/present age rather than the 70s, probably just me though.
Is it wierd that I want a scene with Marietta finding his body and all the aftermath of that?
I didn’t get it from war, I got it from other things, but PTSD does this weird thing where it’s like it rewires you. And if you have a root cause from childhood, then it makes a persons life very difficult later on. Things like being able to interact with others, form and maintain relationships, etc are all impacted. There’s a heightened fight or flight response, and reactions can range from extreme violence to a full shut down.
9829795
9829909
Car phones where a thing for quite a while, not very popular or cheap, but they go back way further than Motorola's cell phone. If I recall correctly, you can find a few old AT&T films on YouTube from the 40s and 50s about car phones