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that was unexpected but nice nontheless
The ending wasn't bad but it seems like Luna is the only one who learned anything considering ponies never learned to judge a book by its cover. Applejack barely knows him and knows that he went through something horrible enough nightmare moon nightmares and yet she acts like he shouldn't have mental scars from that. He needs a lot of patience and someone who is willing to keep coming back to him no matter how rough the road gets. Luna took one bad moment and everyone decided that he couldn't be good on that. Considering how many times twilight lost it even after she became a princess including saying that she didn't need her friends applejack should understand that ager can have us saying stupid stuff.
I hate how Luna and the rest of the ponies got off scott free after driving him to the point of suicide once again. Not only that but he hooks back up with Luna even though she hasn't done anything to resolve the situation in ponyville, and instead of doing that she wants to place him somewhere else instead of fixing her fuck up.
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Right? Like they should be held accountable for this kind of BS they’ve done. This is the exact reason why I stopped watching the show.
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I feel like if this happened in the show they probably would of faced consequences and had a friendship lesson out of it or something.
First off, good ending. Second off, I for whatever reason had Winged Hussars by Sabaton playing at the end of this chapter, and I found it oddly fitting.
Edit:
Roll credits
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This ending reminded me of Toy Story 4 where the villain faced no consequences from all the bullshit she has done.
This was a lovely story to have read, Tis a shame the ending is more on open ended side as I would’ve loved to see them grow closer to marry and have a family but none the less it was ended on a wonderful note. Thanks for the read mate and I look forward to other stories of yours, keep on writing and keep enjoying it!
Is it just me or did the ending feel... abrupt? Like djclarke said, the other characters should have faced some consequences or at least come to the understanding that they're in the wrong. I hope there's a sequel or something to follow this up.
Also,
Reminds me of a kindergarten teacher when you ask to go to the bathroom. "I don't know, can you?"
Woulda been a better ending if he'd turned that self pity party into fuel for revenge, or going somewhere else like the griffons and becoming a merc or something.
Oh and not taking back that bitch Luna.
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I honestly don’t know if they realize that they’re dumbasses or what, but these are so petty to the point that I want to surgically remove their genitalia from their body, without Anastasia.
Or just hire Omni-man from invincible( If you watched the show)
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Here is where I stand with the ending: I agree it's abrupt given everything it's been leading up to, but there comes a point where you can't force yourself to be interested in a project anymore. I wanted to do it justice all the same, but it's better than making my readers wait eons before another chapter drops.
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I can respect that, I've been trying to write a story myself for a few months now and haven't even finished writing the first chapter. I still enjoyed this story regardless.
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Plus if I ever wanna add on I always can, right? lmao
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True, just do what you enjoy doing. Don't feel pressured to do stuff you don't want to.
I was hafe expecting luna to give the town a good earful giving what they did .
Good job 👌👍
The ending is way too abrupt for my liking....... Like really, all that that building up of tension, and then not a single bit of resolution, or punishments thereof? Honestly I was quite enjoying this story, right up til this chapter. Shame too.......
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I have to agree, I’m not too fond of this ending either for similar reasons.
Still a good story overall, though.
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It's likely I'll write another story as a sequel, but it'll be more like a collection of one-shots.
To me it seemed like the story wasn't really at this point...but ok.
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I know, right? Christ, I think I left a comment saying that but I can't find it.
YOU MADMAN HOW COULD YOU
HOW COULD YOU END THIS SO SOON
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gonna be real, I was way over my head with this one