her big magic doesn't work on Twilight but little magic does? No, lost me before you started

9584643
Magic is weird. They can grow a mustache on a dragon with ease but they can't regrow ponies' manes. I don't understand it, I just lose myself in the colors and try not to think too hard. But if you don't like it too much, that's fine. Everyone's got their own thing.

How about an alternate ending?

I'd quite like learn about the aftermath of this version of events, and whether or not they manage to escape this time around. With Twilight out of commission with sexual exhaustion, the situation is very different.

Tldr: sequel plz

9585001
I'll see.
I was not expecting this to get the number of views it did, but it did. Huh.

I wonder whether, if they still beat Starlight in this timeline, they would still give her a chance to reform? Her harm in the original was all done psychologically, but the physical damage to Twilight here was definitely less forgiveable, and I’m assuming from the ending that her friends didn’t consent to their experiences either.

Would be really interested to see you expand this universe, if you ever want to write more in it

9585816
I think I will be sequel-ing this, in time.

Plz make a sequel 😂