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Silverwind Blade
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Silverwind Blade
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good fic man a little heavy on the ass play for me but really good
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Thanks for the comment; you're the first one to make one, so I appreciate it. Thanks for the positive feedback too. Fair comment about the ass-play, but (ha!) I wrote about what I was into, and I know that's not going to be for everyone.
Hay and it’s not like you did not tag it. I did like it a lot
Loved that line
For your first fic, it's amazing! For a man who has as many kinks as me, I've been around the block a few times. Honestly, one of the best cum inflation stories I've ever read due to your combination with watersports and double dicks. The amount of dialog was perfect and personalities were on point. Only criticism was that you may have a little too much detail in certain parts where it can cause it to be slightly boring, but otherwise well done.
Can't wait for the sequel
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Haha, glad you liked that one. I had a lot of fun writing the dialogue; I wanted it to be as non-cliche as I could.
I know what you mean regarding kinks and the like too. I didn't set out with anything like making a point in mind, but I wanted to write something I'd enjoy reading for my particular kinks. Glad to see that's paid off, from your comment.
I'll have to take your comments onboard too, regarding some of the parts where it can be slow or have too much detail, too. Hopefully that's something I can resolve in future stories. I'm currently developing some ideas for the sequel; I'm planning on expanding things a bit and bringing in more of an actual plot, though it'll still have the clop as well.