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Blaqwolf0303
I make crappy story's for people to enjoy.
Blaqwolf0303
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This is my first time making a story so if i do something wrong please tell me!
Typo in the title, hehe.
Noice Get me the battle vodka yuri!!!!!
And great story so far dude keep up the great work
This is pretty decent, apart from formatting and a lot of 'uh's being said its good! Chapter 2 is gonna be awesome
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For appearance sake, capitalize "Chapter" and name of the chapter such as "Introductions". But the having "Chapter 1" and then the name of the chapter isn't needed entirely. Something I've done is look at how others structure their stories to help with my own.
very good, maybe twilight do the same with an is7 ???? or a kv2 ??
Looks pretty good so far!
Besides a few spelling/Grammer mistakes, this is a great start!
PPSH:s have been in production only few months, they were no how given to tanks crews at that point. They should only have Tokarev pistols.
i can sense the vodka's already when i first laid my eyes upon these words
Actually the PPSH-41 didn't enter production until November '41, so none were available in June.
The PPD-40 was still in service at the time however and is a very similar weapon.
This is good da
Thanks for all the support everyone!!!
yea i know about the ppsh but i am lazy so deal with it, but i am happy that there are so many ww2 history buffs that are also like my little pony!
>Rixtgofen
just wait for what i planed down the line. your wish may be true
BLYAT WHERE IS CHAPTER 2
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its in progress life is a bit*h at the momennt sorry
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I get u, forgot about this actually but the first chapter was pretty good!
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There times where names aren't capitalized.
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oof i have to try and fix that in chapter 2
btw chapter 2 WILL be out before i go back to school. mk?
PLAY MORE TF2 BUY MORE HATS gaghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i have been brainwashed by valve BUY MORE HATS POOTIS pootis spencer here HELP ME TAKE MY MONE LORD GABEN!!!!!!!
yer this twilight is a fucking moron or just power happy making people into pony without asking strike one using magic on people without asking strike 2 one more strike and i think killing this twilight is good idea
twilight really need to be punished for this shit DO NOT MAKE ANY THINKING/ANYONE INTO A PONY WITHOUT ITS KNOWLEDGE OR CONSENT! SECOND DO NOT USE MAGIC ON ANYTHING WITHOUT ITS KNOWLEDGE OR CONSENT. this is all twilight fault
fucking retard twilight if your plan is to make twilight the antagonist of this story you are doing well so far
Thank u
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Big oof
but lets be honest twilight acts before she thinks. That's the plot of several episodes in the show like lesson zero.
if im wrong that oof to me than
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agreed but if this is set after lesson zero then she should know better if not Celestia should come down on her like a ton of bricks
If you see somone named Big NiG3r posting mean comments on my stories thats my friend nate. i have already kicked his ass for it but knowing him he is going to do it again lol..... my friends are asses but there good asses
Great story so far, but there are a few things very wrong, atleast to me, one twilight would not just Lazer/magick the humans right out of the bat after she helped with their tank, and I Really don't think she would just knock out the humans after forcing one of them out and them justly defending themselves, and I don't think sunbutt would just come over then look at their memories like that, but hey it's your story, and please keep working on it, it's pretty good.
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I get it twilight may act without thinking, but shes a alicorn and all, and she's talking with unknown species/creatures, and she just attacks them?
Why u cancel?
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You have some good points bud, but yea it's my story. also i am still new to the whole 'Story' thing i just think it's fun to make them.
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dident mean to do that sorry
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Its ok at least u continue. It unlike some authers on here
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Okay, I'll read your new chapter later, kinda busy, also thanks For not intentionally canceling the story bud
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yee
Just got to read this, and I like it, I shall look towards next chapter
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ok, new chapter coming up sir! this one is very special for multiple reason's
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Cool
Fine chapter, good to see this still alive
Yee
That is a lot of deleted comments...
It's pretty engaging and there is a lot of detail in here but I were to say one thing is double spacing between the paragraphs would have been much appreciated... Other than that me likey :)
Well, now I wonder where it would go from there on. Keep it up :)
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my friend keeps shit posting so i keep deleting them, gonna have to kick his ass. and thanks for the positive feedback! makes me feel good knowing i can do something right!
I decided to put a like on every comment that had a dislike from the guy who seemed dedicated to dislike every ramdom comment that appeared 2019 and briefly in 2020 just to spite them because they hate a story with a 1 to 12 dislike ratio.
If he/she dislikes this comment then I win in my adjective to waste precious seconds off this person's life.
Edit: Actually I just liked every single comment, because I can.
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It is my friend Nate. I have kicked his ass before and I cannot right now because of the freaking Covid-19. when school starts back up I will give him the what for. He is genuinely a good person but can be a ass sometimes. just ignore him, I will get my revenge soon enough. Don't worry, we are rednecks and verry good friends we beat each other up from time to time its what we do to keep each other from going out of line