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Purge the pony scum, revenge for the hive!
Yay! It's back! (I hope) Damn cliffhanger endings...
BRUH tbh I just want another chapter XD
Well, this is going to be a difficult battle. Hope she doesn't just splatter her cards all over the table.
The drones have to be picking up on her discrepancies by now. Here's to hoping that won't break up negotiations unexpectedly...
Keep going! ;)
I think the A.N. was intended for the top of the page, given that it's too late to warn us when we've already read about it.
Hurray for inspiration, may it be accurate with it's future violence
Great work keep it up
Here's hoping Chryssie can get Cadance to listen to Tenten's story, among others.
When was she called katara?
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thank you!
I like where this is going
Makes the invasion more justified.
Luna: Maybe it was displaced? Why not use the main snack table for the time being?
Celestia: It is a sacred piece of furniture for my important ritual! It was irreplaceable!
Luna: It was just a table, Tia. I thought you have many after so many years?
Celestia: This one was customized to have secret cake cabinet underneath.
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remember when Chrysalis tried to learn Bending, and ended up falling into the personality of a certain Water Bender from the first series?
i was surprised by this didnt expect to enjoy it so much cant wait til the next chapter
It lives!
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Oh that's right.. that part I didn't like at all or any of the stuff from avatar
I'm surprised the cake isn't the first thing she's screaming about.
Ps. Mental downloading directly into the mind sounds really painful. But it could be as painless as the Avatar spirit mode from Avatar:The last airbender.
It has been quite awhile since this last updated. But this new chapter certainly delivered.
I hope Chrysalis is able to broker some kind of peace agreements after some cold hard justice is served.
Meanwhile, a merchant in the streets below hugs his cabbages in relief.
Well see you guys next year
This looks like a fantastic setup for a radically different arc.
Could we get Cadence x Shining x Chrysalis OTT? She definitely has the leverage for a political marriage, and to who better than the prince and princess of food?
A very good chapter looking forward to more. As for what was mentioned in the warning bluebloods an ass as well as a bigot plus look at how Zecora was treated at first not to mention the nobles and there stuck up ways trying to pull things behind the back s of Celestia and Luna.
So, this will be revived or just this odd one? Im curious where are you taking this
Mhh... Me certainly approvy, yepperony...
We need more... Not only more chapters for this story, but more stories like this...
Maybe I should write one, sometime... *cackles madly to herself*
More please
I am so happy you decided to update this, even if your not gonna actually continue something is better then nothing i guess
Good chapter btw
The skys shall rain fire!
And the seas shall be as blood!
The righteous, shall fall before the wicked!
And all crea- Woops! Got carried away there, hehe.
With the bit involving Celestia I am reminded of the codec call from metal gear solid 3 involving the major.
Question, how does one favorite a second time?
Please tell me you haven't lost interest to keep writing this story? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
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as I have said before, I do not lose interest in a story unless I firmly stick down a Hiatus or Cancelled status to it.
you see that yellow mark on the story? the one that says 'Incomplete'? I am aware its there and I'll be damned if I give people false hope on a story by leaving it tagged as such when I choose to abandon it.
and frankly? I love this and Timid too much to ever really abandon them... but I don't force myself to work on them in a kind of 'schedule' or 'deadline'... because then it won't be a labor of love, at that point it'd just be labor.
sorry again for leaving people waiting like this, but I hope what I say here brightens your mood when it comes to the fate of my stories.
and also don't be afraid to give feedback, good or bad... it fuels me.
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and that makes you my favorite kind of author, the ones who know when to take a break, and not to overdo it and get burned out.
A interesting spin on the wedding
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wait, I just caught that, you plan on making a Little Secrets fic of your own?
go ahead, I approve, moreover, I encourage it!
and also, since I've not mentioned it, I'll let you in on something, the Little Secrets fics on here? they're sort of connected. not in the sense of multiple people all being displaced to the same Equestria, but in the sense that in Timid Little Secrets, OG Chryssi's still gonna want in both Cadi and Shining's metaphorical pants, and here in Deceptive, OG Fluttershy is still gonna be a closet futa.
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Nah, I meant a human to changeling smut story. I wouldn't want to copy your stuff, that would be kinda mean even with permission.
I very much like stories of this type, sadly there are just too few to satisfy my thirst, so I thought 'Why not?' and thought some stuff up that I would like to see. I have two ideas along those lines floating around in my head that I think could work out quite well (in my opinion, anyway), one of those I already wrote three-ish chapters for, just to see where it goes. *shrug*
I love this chapter, and this story, and need more. Awesome story by the way
I can imagine how the "wedding" is going to go. Just after it starts, it turns into a kangaroo court.
Oh come on this just got good and there’s no more chapters I need more
I don't want peace those type of ponies deserves to
FUCKING DIED KILL THEM ALL
ps love the story
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Whoa, there. Calm down.
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don't tell me to calm down when they carve a kid and when they help the community and still get killed so no
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Fair enough, but to get worked up so much over a fictional scenario is a bit much.
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I know but I can imagine as my little brother that happening to
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I doubt anything like that is just going to happen IRL, though. I don't think it's something that happens that commonly that I would fear that my little brother would go through something like that. At least, not in my country... o.O
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I have a very active imagination it's a blessing and a curse
No update..... is story ded? But.... I like this one.....
I love how you’re portraying chrysalis and by proxy cadence and I want more of this so please don’t leave this forever and complete it deserves more it’s too hilarious to not be continued
OMG this was a sad and dark chapter I hope they can make peace one day and forgive.