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meh why did you add a another series this did not need a crossover it was perfect without this random crossover. hell if your gonna add another series add one you can't do with the magic there like the ponies.
Hold up. The colors of the other hives make sense if you follow the element logic, like the Kind hive being pink and funny hive being blue. That I get. Heck, the hive of loyalty being red sounds cool too. But there are flaws with the remaining elements and the hives that might embody them. The orange and purple hives sound interesting until you realize that a Changeling Hive relating to both Honesty and Generosity is a direct shift from the usual methods and personality a Changeling exhibits, which is quite problematic. Finally, we come to the main point of my review. If the six hive colors represent the colors of the original elements of harmony, how the hell does a green color fit into that spectrum? Is Chrysalis’s hive supposed to be magenta? Did the element of Magic used to be green? Is there a missing element or hive? So many unanswered questions.
Owlowiscious secretly being Wan Shi Tong is all sorts of perfection that words cannot begin to express. I can't help but wonder how the ancient knowledge spirit will effect the future plot or if he will ever reveal himself to the other characters. Also his appearance also brings up the grand question of if he exists what else exists from the Avatar universe?
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this is what the elements originally looked like.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/286996/heart-of-the-dragon-general
this is why, love this author and found the idea awesome, so yeah, shameless plug of other author is shameless.
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No, that still doesn’t answer my questions. If Loyalty= Red Gem= Red Lightning Bolt= Rainbow Dash, then explain the following formula: ???= Green Gem= Green ???= ???. While those pictures do show the green gem with the others, what actual element does it stand for, what does it look like after Nightmare Moon, and who inherited it? Those are the questions that need to be answered.
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it's not meant to make sense other than they just happened to match the Elements' original colors, it's meant to make people think they match up and represent something when they don't.
or did you miss the part where Owl Guy said Discord was the reason there was six hives of different colors?
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I have to agree with this. This chapter didn't make much sense and felt pretty random and out of the blue.
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Yeah, could go without the avatar thing. As good as that story is. Not needed here.
pink hive...that could be a another type of changelings...mabye ones that feed off joy and laughter.
Dare I ask who exactly are Winona, Opal, Tank, Gummy... or even better, Angel Bunny?
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Angel Bunny....*shudders* I thi k we all can go without knowing that
Why do we always forget that it does not have to be the very same show we know about? Most people doesn't have a problem when they read fanfiction because it is only the result of the material that inspire the creativity on us.
You make what you want, we are just enjoying the story. You can include whatever you choose to put in. Please remember that those world of imagination die when you choose to cancell the story, so... choose wisely in order so you don't loose your inspiration.
many stories had ended by the same thing. One little change and everything goes to hell.
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While I have to admit that the revelation of Owlowiscious was unexpected (but creative I have to say), I didn't feel a crossover vibe from this chapter. I suspect this Equus is a place where an higher entities like Wan Shi Tong use for vacation time. Since something was powerful enough to effortlessly summon our protagonist to this world (seamlessly replaced the bug queen even), it might not be a surprise there are others non-Equus here as well. And this appearance was just a copyright reminder for our new Chrysalis where not to cross.
Owlowiscious backed off of attacking her pretty quickly from her honesty, but if she gets in trouble again, here's an argument Chrysalis could give to get them on her side:
I'm trying to integrate changelings into pony society for the betterment of both species, but I need to do so from a position of POWER. If I just go to the princesses and request citizenship for my hive, they probably won't grant it, and if they do, my changelings will get fewer rights and protections as refugees, and everyone will be expecting the sneaky shapeshifter to betray them at some point. If I have the upper hand against the princesses and could potentially enslave them, yet everypony sees me give that up just to integrate with them, they will know that I genuinely want to coexist, and that I won't betray them, and my changelings will be much better off in the long run.
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Wan Shi Tong is many things, a keeper of knowledge but also one who wishes to gain more, the fact that Chrysalis admitted to being from an entirely different world, one that granted her knowledge she shouldn't possess, his curiosity overrode whatever parts of him that deemed her a threat if she seemed to be able to have knowledge of the future.
his spite was only ever towards the humans of his world, whatever ponies decided to venture to his library were always respectful and never sought the knowledge to gain one over on their enemies, even if they did so (like a certain two sisters) the intent was made clear that the goal isn't domination but protection.
as for Changelings, while he doesn't care for the fact that they spread misinformation, they've also never threatened his library or ever lied to him when he's decided to show his true form, so he knows they respect him, so they make good secondary knowledge seekers for places Foxes seem too suspicious to be in.
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aw but we already know what rabbit is a vicious monster that would make sense that Fluttershy would calm it or its descendants.(hint: Monty python and the holy grail)
Did not see that coming (Blinks several times)*
My god that was scary
Now i like ny ip main characters as much as the next guy. But the avatar? Thats a little too op. Also would a changling be fully integrated with a persons personality when they change to look like them? If so how could they remember they are a changling and are there to do a mission and not lose thier minds when they replace somepony?
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she isn't able to handle all four elements, she could only hold Aang's form for so long before she had to revert back, but she had the knowledge to make the most of what little time she had in that body to figure out how to create Air-Bending power.
she could, at best, be able to use two elements at once to pull off tricks like lava-bending or swamp-bending, but doing three would cause too much of an imbalance and doing four for possibly longer than a minute could kill her.
and the reason why changelings are able to not be completely overtaken by a disguise personality is because they don't need to actually transform their brain with the rest of them, meaning it's their cortex in a pony suit. Chrysalis couldn't exactly do that since she needed to find where the bending was, and for all she knew the power could've been in the host brain, or her cautious transformation might have her miss a detail that makes the power unusable.
and yes, there have been accounts of first time changers being lost in a personality, but like Chrysalis the Hive-Mind was there to pull them back.
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MOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!!!!
But, seriously. This is a goldmine! Hope this story will continue till the end. Well, keep up the good work man.
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how dare you have a well thought out response to a comment on the internet. are you mad? also thanks for clearing that up. i look forward to the next update
That was lucky. Kinda weird she chose element bending as a "learn magic quick" concept, but whatever.
Honestly she should come clean to her drones somewhat soon. Bet they would totally be on board, what with their enthusiasm so far with her sudden change of personality. 😉
This was a epicly intence chapter.
Holy SHIT! ...you blow my mind
Awesome 👍
Sooo... How did we know that this Chrysalis isn't actually Chrysalis with her mind stuck on a human mindset?
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Oooo boy... It's the Symbol of ultimate evil in my Marksaline storyline
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My mind = Blown...
ZERG RUSHHH
Surprise crossovers are silly, but they're kind of rude to an audience. It can just totally break any narrative tension or investment once the author can suddenly introduce new rules from new settings at any moment.
Even just letting the transformation ability generate useable memories from pure imagination is absurd. By that logic, you could just transform into an imagined version of yourself that has whatever knowledge or skill you need.
Okay it's started out weird and interesting, but, come on. What kind of story is this? Is this supposed to be an LOL random comedy fic? I'm kind of at a loss of what to say.
Time to change to her future nearly omnipotent form without anything in her outwards apparel, besides being more shiny and less hole filled.