It all started one day when Pinkie Pie was heading to the Ponyville Hospital. Outside the hospital, she saw a colt she has never met before in Ponyville. The inspiration for this story was a personal friend being diagnosed with cancer.
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This is quite good Rapidfire.
Thanks for having an early read and letting me know about those spelling errors.
It was well written, if a little but rushed. You're good, keep on writing!
Heyz, I'm writing a story like this, except it was a grade school colt trying to make friends. He makes friends with Twist.
Aww, this was so heartwarming
This should be one of those stories of Pinkie Pie at her best: Bringing Smiles to those who aren't smiling
I don't know if I can read this.
I read the description and it looks sooooooooooo sad.
I'm gonna read it anyways.
I like the story solely for the fact that yesterday i started writing something similar to this but now i have to rethink the whole plot and character, either ways it's a good story
Short but thumbs up anyway.
"The sweetness of the picture sent a tear of happiness down her cheek as she hopped up and down. "
SO CLICHED
But cute :P
Thanks for the nice comments! The second chapter is shaping up to be quite a bit longer than the short first chapter. More Pinky Pie and the other Mane 6 to come!
Awe, this was cute
I agree that this is good but i know it will get sad soon
Nice work
I'll let this blank update pass with a tip:
You know your synopsis? It's too long. Try:
"It all started one day when Pinkie Pie was heading to the Ponyville Hospital. Outside the hospital, she saw a colt she has never met before in Ponyville. Naturally, she is anxious and excited to get to know this colt and become his best friend. The main inspiration for this story was a friend being diagnosed with cancer. "
The main rule of writing is SHOW, DON'T TELL, which is exactly what your description does. Hell, it tells about things you haven't even shown yet!
Ok. Changed the description, thanks for the tip. This is my first fic, so I was a bit unsure of what to write when I submitted the story for approval.
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Other than that I really enjoyed this!
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Other than that I really enjoyed this!
502 errors are annoying amirite?