groceries, keys, scroll, and here weapons for the time being.
Her.
one of the more well-known school had
Schools.
She wore a pair of red dust infused dust that
Was that second dust supposed to be something else?
pranks and prank wars that were the bain of Papa Tusk’s existence.
Bane.
Lily was raised in the orphan
Orphanage.
she would answer with a short tail
Tale.
I know you’re worried about the lad Sunset but you he’s in a good place right now.
I know you’re worried about the lad Sunset but thanks you he’s in a good place right now.
Interesting viewpoint for Sunset. Never figured her as a mother figure. As Sunset’s parts are set at the same time as Twilight’s, how long has she been on Remnant for.
9386942 I haven't decided what Lily is gonna do yet. I do plan on her making a regular appearance every now and then. 9387001 Sunset has been in Remnant for roughly 17 years but the flow of time between the Equestria is very different.
Sunset's reasoning for leaving with Aeon seems... a bit forced. Why is Aeon receiving special treatment when all the rest of the orphans basically get told "Yeah sorry. I know I've been treating you guys like my little siblings for the past who knows how long, but this one new kid means more to me than the rest of you, and he gets preferential treatment." Honestly seems like OC favoritism to me.
9389268 Sunset had already planned to leave after finishing her last mission. She is taking Aeon One, she promised him she would be his teacher if she came back and two even though she is leaving her younger sibling she isn't completely abandoning them as they have Tusk and they knew she wanted to leave. They were also prepared that she might not comeback one day as she is a Huntress.
9389577 While I can't give this away as it would lead to a major spoiler and turn for the main characters. I can tell you that Spike role will be a more essential diplomatic role alongside another pony in upcoming chapters.
9390450 And in all three of them she didn't take in account of what they were going through and refused to see them on their level or POV, ignoring the growing problem they each had and acted out ill rationally and harshly. Luna: Elements Sunset: Banishment from the castle Twilight: Rejection and self exile
9392960 Sunset was not banished from the castle. In the comic Celestia only removed her as her pupil which resulted in Sunset stubbornly running through the mirror, and even if we exclude the comics there's nothing in the EQG universe that says otherwise. So again, Celestia's response to each outburst is different.
Luna: banishment Sunset: removed as pupil Twilight: the logical response when someone very close to you accuses someone else very close to you of being the exact opposite of how you know them
As for what the comic and the show say about Sunset Shimmer, it's fairly evident that she ran off, but then again, why'd she take that book with her? Why was Celestia's copy sent to Twilight like it was just another book? It really looks more like Celestia sent her to the other world, perhaps as an assignment, and one or both simply quit writing to each other.
And until this AU specifically contradicts what's canon, what happened can be assumed to be the same as canon.
As for your questions about the journal...
1. Sunset took the book with her because it was still in her saddlebag. This can be inferred from the fact that she has it and, to quote Equestria Girls and Rainbow Rocks
{Celestia} tried to help her, but she eventually decided to abandon her studies and pursue her own path.
and
Even after I abandoned my studies, I held onto it. Deep down, I guess I knew I was making a big mistake, and I wanted to still have a way to reach out to her.
2. It could be argued that the journal was NOT sent to Twilight like just another book due to the fact that it was on top and seems to have arrived at about the same time that Sunset finished writing, given that it wasn't vibrating until after the delivery pony asked where Twilight wanted the books Celestia sent her. It's also canon that Celestia sometimes knows what's going to happen, an can be and has been used to explain so many of the convenient plot coincidences, so it's possible the same happened here.
Dude. You NEED to proof read. When you mean to write "lost around half" and instead write "last around have" it makes us wonder if you're using a speech-to-text device.
Don't think I've ever read a story with Sunset as a mother figure before. This was pretty nice and sentimental.
good chapter can't wait for next update
You've surprised me again.
I have a feeling Lily's going to do something about Sunset leaving her in Minstral.
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This is a first for me as well
So interesting
Her.
Schools.
Was that second dust supposed to be something else?
Bane.
Orphanage.
Tale.
I know you’re worried about the lad Sunset but thanks you he’s in a good place right now.
Interesting viewpoint for Sunset. Never figured her as a mother figure. As Sunset’s parts are set at the same time as Twilight’s, how long has she been on Remnant for.
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I haven't decided what Lily is gonna do yet. I do plan on her making a regular appearance every now and then.
9387001
Sunset has been in Remnant for roughly 17 years but the flow of time between the Equestria is very different.
Sunset's reasoning for leaving with Aeon seems... a bit forced. Why is Aeon receiving special treatment when all the rest of the orphans basically get told "Yeah sorry. I know I've been treating you guys like my little siblings for the past who knows how long, but this one new kid means more to me than the rest of you, and he gets preferential treatment." Honestly seems like OC favoritism to me.
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Sunset had already planned to leave after finishing her last mission. She is taking Aeon One, she promised him she would be his teacher if she came back and two even though she is leaving her younger sibling she isn't completely abandoning them as they have Tusk and they knew she wanted to leave. They were also prepared that she might not comeback one day as she is a Huntress.
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Excuse me, What did you have plans for Spike reunited with Twilight Sparkle?.
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While I can't give this away as it would lead to a major spoiler and turn for the main characters. I can tell you that Spike role will be a more essential diplomatic role alongside another pony in upcoming chapters.
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I see, I’ll wait and see how it turn out about Spike’s role.
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And in all three of them she didn't take in account of what they were going through and refused to see them on their level or POV, ignoring the growing problem they each had and acted out ill rationally and harshly.
Luna: Elements
Sunset: Banishment from the castle
Twilight: Rejection and self exile
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Sunset was not banished from the castle. In the comic Celestia only removed her as her pupil which resulted in Sunset stubbornly running through the mirror, and even if we exclude the comics there's nothing in the EQG universe that says otherwise. So again, Celestia's response to each outburst is different.
Luna: banishment
Sunset: removed as pupil
Twilight: the logical response when someone very close to you accuses someone else very close to you of being the exact opposite of how you know them
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Keep in mind that this is an AU.
As for what the comic and the show say about Sunset Shimmer, it's fairly evident that she ran off, but then again, why'd she take that book with her? Why was Celestia's copy sent to Twilight like it was just another book? It really looks more like Celestia sent her to the other world, perhaps as an assignment, and one or both simply quit writing to each other.
9403847
And until this AU specifically contradicts what's canon, what happened can be assumed to be the same as canon.
As for your questions about the journal...
1. Sunset took the book with her because it was still in her saddlebag. This can be inferred from the fact that she has it and, to quote Equestria Girls and Rainbow Rocks
and
2. It could be argued that the journal was NOT sent to Twilight like just another book due to the fact that it was on top and seems to have arrived at about the same time that Sunset finished writing, given that it wasn't vibrating until after the delivery pony asked where Twilight wanted the books Celestia sent her. It's also canon that Celestia sometimes knows what's going to happen, an can be and has been used to explain so many of the convenient plot coincidences, so it's possible the same happened here.
Dude. You NEED to proof read. When you mean to write "lost around half" and instead write "last around have" it makes us wonder if you're using a speech-to-text device.
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I recommend this story
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