9356942 Excuse me, my name is chazkopa and I know the Canterlot wedding episode.
I am impressed of Remnant's Twilight Rose, it is a great story but I need to ask you about what is going on back in Canterlot while Twilight was absent?.
9358199 answers will come to those who shall read. Not trying to sound like a jackass. I'm well aware that all of you are want answers but we can only write and put out the chapters as they come to us.
9358220 I must point out that this isn't solely my story I had forgotten to put this on the title page. This story original idea belongs to my good friend Garnet Naturea.
Hey, I was right about her Semblence! Now, however, the question is whether telekinesis is her only magic that got transferred from Equestria or if more of it, like teleporting, may arise.
The Grimm Reaper almost sounds like Princess Luna/Nightmare Moon, especially with the hood Luna wore as the Spirit of Hearthswarming Future in "A Hearthswarming Tail". Add to that the fact that Luna apparently missed the entire changeling invasion at Canterlot, and it's starting to look plausible. It should be noted that I still haven't gotten around to watching anything after Ruby joined Jaune, Nora, and Ren, so if the Grimm Reaper is a reference to a character that wasn't introduced at that point I wouldn't know.
I did find some grammatical errors, but I'll keep it to the two that jumped out to me the most.
The trio would wake up before Ruby and the adult would teach the two seven-year-olds how to make several receipts, like French toast, waffles and fruit salads.
"recipes"
taking glances at the faunus notes
"faunus's" because the notes belong to a single faunus, and dropping the s after an apostrophe only applies when it's a plural, like if several faunuses were taking notes on the same page.
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Insert Girly screaming *
9356942
Excuse me, my name is chazkopa and I know the Canterlot wedding episode.
I am impressed of Remnant's Twilight Rose, it is a great story but I need to ask you about what is going on back in Canterlot while Twilight was absent?.
9358199
answers will come to those who shall read. Not trying to sound like a jackass. I'm well aware that all of you are want answers but we can only write and put out the chapters as they come to us.
9358218
I understand.
Luckily for you, your story is perfect.
9358220
I must point out that this isn't solely my story I had forgotten to put this on the title page. This story original idea belongs to my good friend Garnet Naturea.
9358199
I am glad you asked, that is actually going to be chapter 4 and 5
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I see, that explain it.
9358227
Yes indeed, and the name is chazkopa.
I love this story, thank you for writing it.
I love how you’re true to the characters personalities
Hey, I was right about her Semblence! Now, however, the question is whether telekinesis is her only magic that got transferred from Equestria or if more of it, like teleporting, may arise.
The Grimm Reaper almost sounds like Princess Luna/Nightmare Moon, especially with the hood Luna wore as the Spirit of Hearthswarming Future in "A Hearthswarming Tail". Add to that the fact that Luna apparently missed the entire changeling invasion at Canterlot, and it's starting to look plausible. It should be noted that I still haven't gotten around to watching anything after Ruby joined Jaune, Nora, and Ren, so if the Grimm Reaper is a reference to a character that wasn't introduced at that point I wouldn't know.
I did find some grammatical errors, but I'll keep it to the two that jumped out to me the most.
"recipes"
"faunus's" because the notes belong to a single faunus, and dropping the s after an apostrophe only applies when it's a plural, like if several faunuses were taking notes on the same page.
love the story can't wait for next update