• Member Since 9th Jun, 2012
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A story about a unicorn ending up in the last place he wants to be, Ponyville, in the care of the last pony he ever wanted to see, Twilight Sparkle. This story is about learning to accept mistakes and forgiveness, and that oftentimes the hardest person to forgive is yourself.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 13 )

This has serious potential. (And yes, "Sad" is sometimes too much of a tag.)

I'm along for the whole story.

So far so good, but what about the river that runs through/around Ponyville?

Never underestimate the power of dumb luck. I practically rely on it.

Thanks for the comments/reads! Yeah, I completely forgot about the river when I pictured this in my head. Thankfully, an official map has shown the river to the south, and the mountain to the northeast! So yes, dumb luck is my friend.

Add it to grading room, not the group itself.

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Sorry, I didn't know there was a grading room until...now. My bad!

dammit! tell us what she did already!

Wow... he has some shitty parents...
I got a funny feeling that Twilight is going to do something stupid she thinks is right...





When's an update?

I'm really sorry about the long delay on this chapter! I really want to thank the few people who messaged or commented about new chapters for this story! I hadn't touched it in a while and was honestly tempted just to toss the whole project aside for good. I'm really glad there's at least some people who like it! I'll try to get the next bit out faster, but with classes started back up it will be a bit tighter to find time to work on it. Thanks for reading so far!

Shame, so Terra's had it rough for so long... bet he's so angry he doesn't know what he is angry at exactly (and vents it out on a pony who was as blissful to his pain as she is to microscopic life)

Ponies should be more considered to those who have been forgotten and forsaken...

Read this

It may have been your hardest to write, but it was by far my fav chapter so far. I think the wording you have for the anger is perfect short and to the point. :raritywink:

Well things are starting to get interesting. I can't want to read the next chapter :twilightsmile:

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