Looks very good. As for a fantasy...
Going by the comics, they met in high school and Cadence was a cheerleader. Maybe something involving the cheerleader and either an older student or the coach? Possibly a bit more aggressive or domineering than Shining's been comfortable being?

I'm going to keep up with this~

Woo, another story! I'm gonna check this out, like later or something. :D

Got to be some pet play, maby a little S&M.

What if it's revealed at the end that Shining didn't go anywhere, and just watched everything with an invisibility spell because he's a cuck with a voyeurism kink?~

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Or maybe blend the cheerleader with her damsel fantasy - head cheerleader sacrificed to the opposing QB? ;)

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no, i don't do cuckold.

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That could be interesting.

Maybe that roleplaying she mentioned or some other kind of roleplaying like teacher-student affairs. I wouldn't recommend petplay or serious S&M, maybe either one of them just getting a little aggressive. Could also bring in a few of Cadences' maids and make it an orgy. Fun in the shower or bath is an option.

If possible, you could do alternate endings which would make things interesting. Such as one involving Cadence getting so addicted to Spike that she divorces Shining, another involving her getting pregnant with Spike's kid or gets the other alicorn princesses involved.

Soooo, did they just forget about Flurryheart taking up the majority of Cadance's time? I mean, yes, Sunburst is Flurryheart's official foalsitter, but it's not like he can watch her for a month solid...

She glanced at his face. Sure enough, Spike's face was half red with smoke billowing from his nostrils. Her voice slipped into a sultry purr. "I'm rather looking forward to trying it out for real, along with several others."

Several others??? Who else is coming? Is this a way to have Caddie and Chryssie get down with the 'Saviour of the Crystal Empire'? Or is there some point where Cadence actually saw some of the letters that were mailed to Spike and actually summoned some of the crystal pony fans to actually have the shot to have a date with Spike the Brave and Glorious....

I have to admit, MrWriterWriter, you probably have done it again....unrelated, is there any process with some of your other works, particularly A Tale of Two Princes and School of Hard Knocks??

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it's set before flurry heart's born

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those two are being stubborn, inspiration-wise

Im soo following this!

Kink: Tail play.

Do what you wrote: dragon conquest.

Kinks i would love to see:
Pregnancy (hyper if possible)
Light bondage
(Vore if possible)
Hyper in general (boobs, ass, etc)
Definitely looking forward to this story!

Well we got to have some naughty play throughout the castle. Candance teaseing spike and vice versa has they go through the castle till the cant stand it and screw some where. Cadence dresses up as chrisylis to dominate spike ( dress as shinning) Public, they got to do public sex in some way. On the castle balcomy, or infront of spike's statue. Cadance is so going to boost spike ego and show him off.
Harem build up. Some thing you can do since its a save bet candence has mutple ponys coming in for what ever kink going , you can have the one spike like ( or cadence think spike looks sexy with) stay and build up. They help out with the on going sex games till the big final orgy. The final orgy will be cadence's dragon ruler fantasy turned up to 10. Spike the evil lord has captured the princess of love and wishes to currept her to the v princess of lust. And the poor princess is lossing. Her loyal guards tried to save her but lost to the dragons personal pets and arenow putting on a show or helping turning their princess. But just when all hope seem lost shinning comes in and with the power of hard love saves his princess and leave the dragon lord who is too tired to give chase.

This. This right here is how you frustrate me with which of your stories I hope gets updated sooner. The speakeasy story just had the top spot, and now this one does.

Edit-Fantasy-: Spike, the Brave Knight and hero of the Crystal Empire, has come to defeat the evil and dark Queen of Lust with his spear of justice!

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think that'd fall into 'Fantasy'

Fantasies I'd like to see: schoolgirl seducing teacher and vice versa.

Spike is Cadance's "secret lover" while her husband is away.

Spike is a firema- person (dragon, so fire resistant) who saves her from a fire and she repays him.

I have some other ideas but they've made me think I may just write them myself.

*cough*

Oh look, another story that won't get finished.

*cough*

Kink limits?

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long as it's nothing like vore, scat, watersports, cuckolding, or similar.

Cadance could enjoy some face-fucking from Spike

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Muzzle penetration (really deep cunnilingis) and fisting?

fantasy of rape while shining is not spike turns candace into his sex slave
 
A trio with queen chrysalis.

also that such a candace with 8 months of pregnancy these are my fantasies at the moment

> looks at story description
> looks at character tags
This better have fisting
> looks at story tags again
> TFW anthro
> goddammit.jpg
This better have fisting anyway.
> adds to tracking

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So vore is a no... probably because they're close in size, correct? I'm sure there's a bondage fantasy or two Cadance has been just DYING to try out that Shining is just a no go for. And who better to tie up and make helpless than the drake chosen to be her fuck buddy while Shining's away?

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bondage i can work with.

Alright, I have a few things I would like to NOT be added.
1. Vore (Ok that was already mentioned but still)
2. Watersports
3. Scat
4. Ridiculous macro/micro stuff.

Other than that, I’m fine with anything people suggest.

As for things I would like to see? Hemipenis.

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Then might I request some definite bondage. Of both. Not at the same time, obviously. First Cadance. Bound and helpless at Spike's mercy. And to please Shakespeare... some fisting involved in the bondage. I mean, in the show he's small enough that, if it were rated R, Spike is the perfect height to have the optimum angle for staring directly at the ponuts and vags of LITTERALLY everypony in Equestria. Except maybe Celestia who, by Equestrian standards, seems to be freakishly tall for a pony.

How about something like teasing gone wrong; Cadence handcuffs spike to the bed and mercilessly teases him, only for Spike's greed to overpower him, breaks out and...
Well, I'll leave the rest up to you to decide.

Perhaps a wedding night fantssy/wife play?
Naked apron is always a good one

Described cadances breast size before describing how spike looks. DD's infact. I'M OUT! *closes book and walks off.*

If Spike has wings or not, they should go up to the highest point of the tower and fuck there. So Public Sex. Forgot the name, but that would also be the Dragon taken a Princess in the tower.

What is wrong with Cadance?

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P.T.S.F or Perpetually Thirsty as Fuck Syndrome. I think.

hubba-hubba, if she wasn't married, I'd fulfill some of her fantasies