Awesome chapter, hope there will be more like this in the future, by the looks of it I doubt I have to worry.
I'm loving the RarityxTwilight shipping, and the MutexTwilight shipping, and the SteadfastxTwilight shipping... really wondering how all of that is going to end.
Uh, yeah, no kidding. Man, she really made a mess at Sweet Apple Acres. Big Mac sure was awesome in that scene. Good news (sorta) is that Apple Bloom now has some nice character-building mental scars to grow up with!
What Dash fails to understand is that these ponies are all just pieces of Twilight. Creativity isn't an enemy, but a part of Twilight that needs to be brought back to the whole, and Logic doesn't have the capacity to react to AJ's situation the way she wants her to.
So now seems like a good time for Rarity make her move on Logic. I have no problem with Rarity seeking love from another pony, but was gets on my nerves every damn time is when she does it without appearing to give much consideration to the possibility that she could easily break Spike's heart and takes no steps to deal with him first. Considering our communication so far and how well you've written this story (despite the fact that some excellent MLP writers are total dicks to Spike) I'm certain that's not the case here. Still, reading that last part reminded me of those other fanfics the same way reading a car wipe out in a book might remind me of my unpleasant experience on an icy highway.
...Is Rarity taking advantage of the fact that Twi (probably) won't remember Logic's ventures to have her way with her? That's uh, a little rapey. Also Logic has been a lot more creative than Creativity thus far (NOT THAT THAT'S A PROBLEM I LURF LOGIC)
1328164 If watching the Power Rangers in childhood has taught me anything, it's that everything ends with explosions so... probably explosions. Something is gonna explode at the end... most likely.
1328518 Logic is a darker green (that's why Pinkie thought she was a changeling) and Curiosity is a light lime green. As for Curiosity's location, if she's not doing recon all over Equestria for Logic than she's downstairs in the Library's basement reading or fiddling with a variety of things.
1328965 No! Well... maybe. Still I like to point out that it is one-sided. Logic doesn't feel love or lust and Rarity's mistaken her kindness and appreciation as Logic's way of intimacy. Really the only true shipping is Anger and Mute.
1329974 Nothing builds character like getting thrown headfirst into a fire by a piece of your sister's best friend's mind only to be saved by another piece of your sister's best friend's mind. And yes, Big Mac was a boss in this chapter, it's what he does. As for Rarity it's my belief that she either doesn't really process that Spike has a crush on her or she dismisses it as sort of like a simple schoolyard crush he'll get over once he's older, which is the reason for her not paying attention to his feelings.
1331093 I wouldn't say taking advantage of her, it's more like Rarity's mind is taking Twilight out of the friendzone and becoming attracted to her because of Logic's attitude towards her (which she is mistaking for intimacy). Secondly while it might seem like Creativity's not living up to her namesake just wait, creative plans rarely happen overnight.
1332334 If Rarity fails to recognize Spike's feelings, that's a subplot waiting to happen. It's when an author thinks the little guy is just inconsequential and doesn't bother to address the issue that Rarity shipping becomes difficult to enjoy.
At the end of every chapter I feel like faving this fic. Then I rememeber I already did it. Whyyyyyyy?! Anyway: this is one of the most original ideas I've seen in a MLP fanfic and I cannot express how glad I am to have found it.
Damn Twilight you scareh!
Awesome chapter, hope there will be more like this in the future, by the looks of it I doubt I have to worry.
I'm loving the RarityxTwilight shipping, and the MutexTwilight shipping, and the SteadfastxTwilight shipping... really wondering how all of that is going to end.
I thought Logic was purple, and that Curiosity was green.
... Where is Curiosity anyway?
Oh come on, another shipping of two Mane 6 characters......
Swing Hard - Dawnbringer
Uh, yeah, no kidding. Man, she really made a mess at Sweet Apple Acres. Big Mac sure was awesome in that scene. Good news (sorta) is that Apple Bloom now has some nice character-building mental scars to grow up with!
What Dash fails to understand is that these ponies are all just pieces of Twilight. Creativity isn't an enemy, but a part of Twilight that needs to be brought back to the whole, and Logic doesn't have the capacity to react to AJ's situation the way she wants her to.
So now seems like a good time for Rarity make her move on Logic. I have no problem with Rarity seeking love from another pony, but was gets on my nerves every damn time is when she does it without appearing to give much consideration to the possibility that she could easily break Spike's heart and takes no steps to deal with him first. Considering our communication so far and how well you've written this story (despite the fact that some excellent MLP writers are total dicks to Spike) I'm certain that's not the case here. Still, reading that last part reminded me of those other fanfics the same way reading a car wipe out in a book might remind me of my unpleasant experience on an icy highway.
...Is Rarity taking advantage of the fact that Twi (probably) won't remember Logic's ventures to have her way with her? That's uh, a little rapey. Also Logic has been a lot more creative than Creativity thus far (NOT THAT THAT'S A PROBLEM I LURF LOGIC)
This story is good and you should feel good
1328164 If watching the Power Rangers in childhood has taught me anything, it's that everything ends with explosions so... probably explosions. Something is gonna explode at the end... most likely.
1328518 Logic is a darker green (that's why Pinkie thought she was a changeling) and Curiosity is a light lime green. As for Curiosity's location, if she's not doing recon all over Equestria for Logic than she's downstairs in the Library's basement reading or fiddling with a variety of things.
1328965 No! Well... maybe. Still I like to point out that it is one-sided. Logic doesn't feel love or lust and Rarity's mistaken her kindness and appreciation as Logic's way of intimacy. Really the only true shipping is Anger and Mute.
1329974 Nothing builds character like getting thrown headfirst into a fire by a piece of your sister's best friend's mind only to be saved by another piece of your sister's best friend's mind. And yes, Big Mac was a boss in this chapter, it's what he does. As for Rarity it's my belief that she either doesn't really process that Spike has a crush on her or she dismisses it as sort of like a simple schoolyard crush he'll get over once he's older, which is the reason for her not paying attention to his feelings.
1331093 I wouldn't say taking advantage of her, it's more like Rarity's mind is taking Twilight out of the friendzone and becoming attracted to her because of Logic's attitude towards her (which she is mistaking for intimacy). Secondly while it might seem like Creativity's not living up to her namesake just wait, creative plans rarely happen overnight.
1332334 If Rarity fails to recognize Spike's feelings, that's a subplot waiting to happen. It's when an author thinks the little guy is just inconsequential and doesn't bother to address the issue that Rarity shipping becomes difficult to enjoy.
Woohoo.
At the end of every chapter I feel like faving this fic. Then I rememeber I already did it. Whyyyyyyy?!
Anyway: this is one of the most original ideas I've seen in a MLP fanfic and I cannot express how glad I am to have found it.