Great story. Didn't notice any mistakes while I was reading through it.

Jesus, this gets more and more crazy with every chapter, I love it

My question was asked through Spike woot!

What's the total again?

My, my, Morality has quite the potty mouth. Kinda reminds me of my mother.

Lie - Dream Theater

Seriously deceit just that just screams Gamma this guy may not have known it but this is quite similar to the latter seasons of Red Vs. Blue
And i love every second of it

1214101 In case you're wondering I'm actually a longtime fan of Red vs Blue. It's a great series and while I wasn't thinking specifically about the series when I wrote this I do see the resemblance. Geez just think if Deceit and Gamma met each other ... they'd have a field day like no other.

1218445 Good to see you're enjoying it. As for the craziness just wait... It gets better.

1218485 They've captured a total of twenty of Twilight's psyche fragments. I don't include every capture cause that would just get repetitive and boring (most captures aren't that exciting).

1219513 She certainly does. Morality can be worse than Anger sometimes, but it's not her fault. She has... personality issues.

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I meant 20 out of what.

1222147 Oops, got confused there. I still haven't decided how many fragments there actually are. I'm leaning towards a number between 34 and 42.

Small nitpick here, but it doesn't really make sense that Zecora had to go get the mane six to, in turn, go after the CMC. She could've retrieved them herself.

Morality seems like an interesting character. If I'm not mistaken, the reason she's like that is to suggest the duality of intelligence, and to demonstrate the inner conflict we all experience, or something of that respect. Nice idea on your part. Here's still hoping there a Lust fragment out there, and that her target is Spike ...

Lust: [licks lips]
Spike: "Wh-which fragment are you? Hunger?
Lust: "Close enough."

At this rate, I'm probably gonna end up writing that whole scene. Now ... who could that injured pegasus be?

1252540 I wouldn't call it nitpicking, more like picking up on a rather illogical detail. It does seem a little odd that Zecora wouldn't fetch them herself but there are two reasons why. One is Zecora probably knows the forest the best so she easily knows that one pony (or zebra) would be ineffective at bringing back the fillies with all the danger the forest presents. That, and she saw Deceit making her own way to the forest and understood that she was trouble and probably planned to block any attempts to reach the CMC (as shown in the chapter). I hope that clears up it up (I probably should have made Zecora explain that in the chapter... she's hard to write dialogue for with all that rhyming).

And about Morality, you're spot on with her. No matter how hard we try we will always have two sides: the noble side that seeks cooperation, group acceptance, and friendship; while the other side wants dominance: it wants to be the Alpha male/female, it wants to show its dominance through action, and thinks only of itself and its own survival. Obviously because Twilight was a good person her noble side has control of the body while the evil side hitchhikes, not in control but always there.

And lastly, about a lust fragment, well we'll just have to wait and see

1223832 go for 42 its the answer to the ultimate question.

also whose the hurt mare the hydra almost ate?